Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“clear for Four Seasons”表达不准确，且有多余的停顿词。建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: I live in northern China, where the weather is clear and sunny throughout the four seasons.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且缺乏连贯性。建议使用简单明了的句子表达喜好，并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I feel uncomfortable in the heat, but in cold weather, I can simply wear more clothes to stay warm.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误明显，表达不完整且不连贯。建议明确表达喜好并用具体细节支持观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because it helps keep my skin moisturized, while dry weather often makes my skin feel dry and uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议使用完整句子，清晰说明习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast every day because I need to know if it will rain before I go to the library.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多，缺乏具体细节。建议明确说明气候变化的影响，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: I think climate change, like rising temperatures, has caused some animals to become extinct because their habitats are destroyed.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但最后一句不完整。建议注意句子完整性，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be refreshing to experience new weather conditions. For example, if I live in a dry city, I might want to visit a place with a wet climate to enjoy the rain.

× I live in the north of China, so the weather is, umm, clear for Four Seasons and it is often, uh, sunny day.

✓ I live in the north of China, so the weather is, umm, clear for four seasons and it is often, uh, sunny days.

这里的“Four Seasons”应为复数形式“four seasons”，表示四个季节；“sunny day”应为复数“sunny days”，因为天气通常是多日的情况。

× I prefer cold weather because hot weather usually makes me no way to address the sense of hot.

✓ I prefer cold weather because hot weather usually makes me unable to handle the feeling of heat.

原句中“makes me no way to address the sense of hot”表达不正确，应使用“makes me unable to handle the feeling of heat”来表达无法应对炎热的感觉。

× But in cold days I just wear more and more.

✓ But on cold days I just wear more and more.

“in cold days”应改为“on cold days”，因为表示具体某一天或某些天时，英语中用介词“on”。

× I prefer wet weather because the wet weather can keep my skin on.

✓ I prefer wet weather because wet weather can keep my skin moist.

“keep my skin on”表达不正确，应改为“keep my skin moist”，表示保持皮肤湿润。

× Wet and dry weather usually makes me feel drier.

✓ Wet and dry weather usually make me feel drier.

“Wet and dry weather”是复数主语，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”。

× I usually checking weather forecast about every day because I need to go to the library so I'm have I must check the weather if it's.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every day because I need to go to the library, so I must check the weather.

“usually checking”应改为“usually check”，动词应为一般现在时；“I'm have I must”结构错误，应简化为“I must”。

× I think the climate change, such as becoming hotter and hotter brings the effect of some animal. Extinct.

✓ I think climate change, such as becoming hotter and hotter, causes some animals to become extinct.

原句结构混乱，应调整为“climate change... causes some animals to become extinct”，使句子完整且通顺。

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from my hometown because it would be refreshing to experience new weather conditions. For example, if I live in a dry city, I might want to visit a wet place to.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from my hometown because it would be refreshing to experience new weather conditions. For example, if I live in a dry city, I might want to visit a wet place too.

句尾“to”应为“too”，表示“也”，是副词用法。