Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'really convenient for me', you could say 'quite pleasant'. Also, 'not cold winters' could be more naturally expressed as 'mild winters'.

Ví dụ: I live in the west of Kazakhstan, where the weather is quite pleasant. We experience all four seasons, with warm summers and mild winters. Moreover, extreme weather events or natural disasters are rare, which makes it enjoyable to spend time outdoors.

Gợi ý: Your answer is well-structured and clear, but watch for minor grammatical errors such as 'the winter is in my region aren't so severe'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I find winter quite challenging, even though winters in my region aren't very severe these days. During the cold months, I tend to stay indoors a lot, which makes me feel restless. Therefore, I enjoy hot weather more as it allows me to be more active outdoors.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like 'It was it was'. Also, try to provide more specific details and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I have visited places with wet climates, and I found it difficult to breathe there. Therefore, dry weather suits me better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but slightly unclear in the phrase 'when I do it'. Try to clarify and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast every day during the summer because temperatures in my region can get very hot. Additionally, I look at the ultraviolet index to decide if I need to apply sunscreen to protect my skin.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more specific and natural. Instead of 'increasing of temperature', say 'rising temperatures'. Also, explain briefly why these changes matter to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, the effects of climate change are visible in daily life. For example, rising temperatures and higher levels of ultraviolet radiation affect our environment and health.

Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful but a bit wordy. Try to be more concise and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I think'.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it helps people discover which climate suits them best. Therefore, in the future, I plan to travel to many places to find the most comfortable climate for me.

× I live in the West of Kazakhstan and the weather is really convenient for me.

✓ I live in the west of Kazakhstan and the weather is really comfortable for me.

The word 'convenient' is incorrectly used to describe weather; 'comfortable' is the appropriate adjective. Also, 'west' should not be capitalised unless part of a proper noun.

× We experience all Four Seasons with warm summers and not cold winters.

✓ We experience all four seasons with warm summers and mild winters.

'Four Seasons' should be lowercase unless referring to a proper noun. 'Not cold winters' is awkward; 'mild winters' is a better expression.

× I actually prefer hot weather because I find winter quite challenging, even though the winter is in my region aren't so severe these days.

✓ I actually prefer hot weather because I find winter quite challenging, even though the winters in my region aren't so severe these days.

The phrase 'the winter is in my region aren't so severe' is grammatically incorrect. 'Winters' should be plural to match 'aren't', and 'the' before 'winter' is unnecessary here.

× From my point of view, dry weather is always better than wet weather because I visited the countries or cities with wet weather.

✓ From my point of view, dry weather is always better than wet weather because I have visited countries or cities with wet weather.

The past simple 'visited' is less appropriate here; present perfect 'have visited' is better to indicate experience. Also, 'the countries or cities' is incorrect; 'countries or cities' without 'the' is better.

× It was it was really challenging for me to breathe.

✓ It was really challenging for me to breathe.

The phrase 'It was it was' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'It was'.

× I tend to check the weather forecast every day during the summer because the temperatures in my region can get very hot when I do it.

✓ I tend to check the weather forecast every day during the summer because the temperatures in my region can get very hot then.

The phrase 'when I do it' is awkward and unclear; 'then' is a better adverb to refer to the time mentioned.

× From my point of view, effects of climate change are visible in our everyday life.

✓ From my point of view, the effects of climate change are visible in our everyday life.

The plural noun 'effects' requires the definite article 'the' to specify particular effects. Also, 'everyday life' is singular and correct.

× We can see it in the increasing of temperature and also the level of ultraviolet in the air.

✓ We can see it in the increase of temperature and also the level of ultraviolet radiation in the air.

The noun 'increasing' is incorrectly used; 'increase' is correct here. Also, 'ultraviolet' should be 'ultraviolet radiation' for clarity.

× I think that visiting other cities or countries to compare the weather conditions is really important for people to understand what the climate is comfortable for them individually.

✓ I think that visiting other cities or countries to compare the weather conditions is really important for people to understand which climate is comfortable for them individually.

The phrase 'what the climate is comfortable for them' is incorrect; 'which climate is comfortable for them' is the correct relative clause.