Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured and clear by directly stating the typical weather and then giving specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to sound more natural and confident.

Ví dụ: The weather in my town is usually cold and sunny. We experience a lot of rain because we are close to the mountains, which causes frequent showers and chilly temperatures.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct vocabulary and grammar, such as 'hot weather' instead of 'hot water'. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because in summer, I can wear light clothes like T-shirts and shorts. Moreover, I enjoy going swimming in pools or at the beach, which is a great advantage of warm weather.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because rainy days feel cosy. For example, I enjoy reading books by the window while listening to the rain, which creates a relaxing atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about when and how often you check the forecast.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out. This helps me decide whether to wear warm or light clothes depending on the day's weather.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite detailed and relevant. To improve, focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid minor grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' to enhance coherence.

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have damaged communities worldwide. Furthermore, rising global temperatures have led to melting polar ice caps, contributing to sea level rise that threatens coastal areas.

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and avoid repetition. Be specific about your reasons for visiting places with different climates.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, during winter in my country, my family and I often go on vacation to warm places like Dubai or Thailand because we enjoy the hot beaches and sunshine.

× the weather is maybe cold and sunny and we have a lot of rains because that's why we need to close to the mountains have a lot of rains and some cold weather.

✓ the weather is maybe cold and sunny and we have a lot of rain because that's why we need to be close to the mountains which have a lot of rain and some cold weather.

The word 'rains' is incorrectly pluralised here. 'Rain' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised. Also, 'close to the mountains' needs the verb 'be' to be grammatically correct, and 'which' is needed to connect the clause describing the mountains.

× I most prefer hot water because in summer you can dress in lightly like dress or T-shirt with shorts and hang out drinking uh cold drinks with ice.

✓ I most prefer hot weather because in summer you can dress lightly, like wearing a dress or T-shirt with shorts and hang out drinking cold drinks with ice.

'Hot water' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'hot weather'. 'Dress in lightly' is incorrect; 'dress lightly' is the correct phrase. Also, 'like dress' should be 'like wearing a dress' for clarity.

× And in hot summer you can go to swimming, swimming pools or beaches and it's advantages of hot waters.

✓ And in hot summer you can go swimming, to swimming pools or beaches and there are advantages of hot weather.

The phrase 'go to swimming' is incorrect; it should be 'go swimming'. Also, 'it's advantages' should be 'there are advantages'. 'Hot waters' is incorrect; 'hot weather' is appropriate here.

× I must prefer wet weathers because when you know towards rainy you can it's more cozy to read the books in the window at the window and being some dreaming girls.

✓ I prefer wet weather because when it is rainy, it is cozier to read books by the window and daydream. I like this feeling.

'Wet weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralised. 'When you know towards rainy' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'when it is rainy'. 'It's more cozy' should be 'it is cozier'. 'Being some dreaming girls' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'daydream' fits better.

× I need to wear some warm or some lightly for example.

✓ I need to wear something warm or something light, for example.

'Some warm' and 'some lightly' are incorrect. 'Warm' is an adjective and needs a noun or pronoun like 'something' to modify. 'Lightly' is an adverb; the adjective 'light' is appropriate here.

× I definitely check the weather for today and after they decide what I need where.

✓ I definitely check the weather for today and then decide what I need to wear.

'After they decide' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'then decide'. 'Where' is a homophone error; the correct word is 'wear' when referring to clothing.

× which have caused significant damage to communicates communities worldwide.

✓ which have caused significant damage to communities worldwide.

'Communicates communities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communities'. 'Communicates' is a verb and does not fit here.

× Additional rising global temperatures have led to melting and polar ice caps, the clusters contributing the sea level rise threatening coastal areas.

✓ Additionally, rising global temperatures have led to melting of polar ice caps, which contributes to sea level rise threatening coastal areas.

'Additional' should be 'Additionally' to function as an adverb. 'Melting and polar ice caps' is incorrect; it should be 'melting of polar ice caps'. 'The clusters contributing the sea level rise' is unclear and incorrect; 'which contributes to sea level rise' is correct.

× Yes, definitely in my in my country being the winter we are with my family go to vacation to the Dubai or to the Thailand to hot weathers.

✓ Yes, definitely. In my country, during winter, my family and I go on vacation to Dubai or Thailand for hot weather.

'Being the winter' is incorrect; 'during winter' is correct. 'We are with my family go to vacation' is incorrect; it should be 'my family and I go on vacation'. 'To the Dubai or to the Thailand' is incorrect; 'to Dubai or Thailand' is correct. 'To hot weathers' is incorrect; 'for hot weather' is correct.

× It's just we missed the hot beaches and we thought was ours.

✓ We just miss the hot beaches and think they are ours.

'It's just we missed' is incorrect; 'We just miss' is correct. 'We thought was ours' is incorrect; 'we think they are ours' is correct to express current feelings.