Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много повторов и грамматических ошибок, что снижает естественность речи. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и точные выражения, избегать тавтологии и структурировать ответ логично.

Ví dụ: Currently, it is rainy and quite cloudy where I live. The temperature is mild, not too hot or cold. This weather is perfect for walking in the park and relaxing with friends or family.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие формулировки. Следует избегать тавтологии и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy activities like swimming and walking in the park. In contrast, I dislike cold weather since it limits outdoor activities and makes me feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много пауз и неуверенности, а также повторения. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, использовать связующие слова и конкретизировать причины предпочтений.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I find it refreshing and it makes walking more enjoyable. On the other hand, dry weather often lowers my mood, especially when I have to attend extra lessons.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много повторов и неуклюжих выражений. Следует использовать более простые и четкие предложения, избегать лишних слов и пауз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning as part of my daily routine. This helps me decide what to wear for the day.

Gợi ý: Ответ очень неясен и содержит много пауз и повторов. Рекомендуется подготовить более структурированный ответ с конкретными примерами и использовать связующие слова.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, climate change has caused unusual weather patterns in recent years. For example, we have experienced more extreme temperatures and unpredictable rainfall.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать более точные формулировки и связующие слова для улучшения связности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it is interesting to experience new weather conditions. It would be an exciting way to learn more about my country.

× So in nowadays there is a there is a rain and it's very cloudy and it's not very hot and also cold and we can just walk around the around the parks and just relax with our friends or families.

✓ So nowadays there is rain, and it's very cloudy. It's not very hot, but also not very cold, and we can just walk around the parks and relax with our friends or family.

The phrase 'there is a there is a rain' is redundant and incorrect; 'rain' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family group. The sentence was also split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So personally I prefer hot weather because there are so many activities which can be done in summer such as swimming or just walking around the parks and also seated home and relax.

✓ So personally, I prefer hot weather because there are many activities that can be done in summer, such as swimming or just walking around the parks, and also sitting at home and relaxing.

The phrase 'seated home' is incorrect; the correct form is 'sitting at home'. Also, 'which can be done' is better as 'that can be done' in defining clauses. Prepositions and verb forms were corrected for natural English usage.

× On the other hand, I hate cold weather because of cold.

✓ On the other hand, I hate cold weather because of the cold.

The word 'cold' as a noun requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the cold weather or cold conditions. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× So I prefer wet weather because it's very comfortable and convenient to walk.

✓ So I prefer wet weather because it's very comfortable and convenient for walking.

The phrase 'convenient to walk' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'convenient for walking' to express suitability of the weather for the activity.

× And on the other hand, dry weather is a bit, umm, bad because it decreases our mood, My mood especially, and I don't like dry weather, uh, especially when I, uh, go to some extra lessons.

✓ On the other hand, dry weather is a bit bad because it decreases my mood especially, and I don't like dry weather, especially when I go to some extra lessons.

The phrase 'our mood, My mood especially' is inconsistent; it should be 'my mood especially' to maintain pronoun agreement and clarity.

× Yes, umm, my daily routine starts with a checking of the weather forecast and because I should know, uh, what will I wear today?

✓ Yes, umm, my daily routine starts with checking the weather forecast because I should know what I will wear today.

The phrase 'a checking of the weather forecast' is unnatural; 'checking the weather forecast' is the correct form. Also, the question word order 'what will I wear today?' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'what I will wear today'.

× So, uh, especially in the mornings, I check, check the weather forecast and uh, because uh, when I wake up, I already, uh, should, should know what will I wear from today.

✓ So, especially in the mornings, I check the weather forecast because when I wake up, I should already know what I will wear today.

The phrase 'what will I wear from today' is incorrect; it should be 'what I will wear today'. Also, 'should already know' is the correct word order. The repeated words were removed for clarity.

× Uh, in my opinion, it became a bit unusual, uh, because of, umm, the effects of climate change.

✓ In my opinion, it has become a bit unusual because of the effects of climate change.

The verb tense 'became' is past tense but the context suggests present perfect 'has become' to indicate a recent change. Also, unnecessary fillers were removed for clarity.

× And I can say that, uh, it's a bit normal. I don't know why, uh, due to maybe the, uh, world, world cramming.

✓ And I can say that it's a bit abnormal. I don't know why, maybe due to world overcrowding.

The phrase 'it's a bit normal' contradicts the previous statement about unusual changes; 'abnormal' fits better. 'World cramming' is incorrect; the correct term is 'world overcrowding'. Also, unnecessary fillers were removed.

× So yes, why not? Because it's very interesting and entertaining to visit other cities in my country and check the climate of the weather and I can create something unusual to myself and it's very interesting.

✓ So yes, why not? Because it's very interesting and entertaining to visit other cities in my country and check the weather and climate, and I can experience something unusual for myself, which is very interesting.

The phrase 'check the climate of the weather' is redundant; 'weather and climate' is sufficient. 'Create something unusual to myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'experience something unusual for myself'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and correctness.