Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good with clear contrasts and examples. However, avoid repeating words like 'making' twice consecutively. Also, try to use linking words such as 'whereas' or 'on the other hand' to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live varies significantly throughout the year. For instance, summers are intensely hot, making outdoor activities quite exhausting, whereas winters are pleasantly mild and comfortable, which makes it an ideal time to enjoy outdoor excursions without any hassle.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but contains some errors such as 'shipping hot beverages' and 'daily chili days' which affect clarity. Use precise vocabulary and correct phrases. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly using words like 'for instance' and 'furthermore'.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending a long time indoors. For instance, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes like woolen sweaters and sipping hot beverages such as tea or coffee, which make chilly days much more comfortable. Furthermore, cold weather is perfect for outdoor activities like walking or jogging.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains mistakes like 'sleeping on wet roads' which is unclear. Use accurate expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words such as 'for example' and 'moreover' to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet roads. Moreover, dry weather makes it easier to plan outdoor excursions and travel since there are fewer chances of disruptions caused by rain.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains a tense error in 'I really checked'. Use present tense for habits. Also, try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to improve flow.

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast before leaving for work, especially during the rainy season. I find it very helpful because it allows me to plan my day better, such as deciding what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella. Therefore, if the rain is unexpected, I can take necessary precautions to avoid getting wet.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but has grammatical errors like 'In recent year' and 'summers are become'. Use plural forms and correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words such as 'for instance' and 'furthermore' to enhance coherence.

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has had a significant impact on both the environment and human life. For instance, summers have become increasingly hotter and more intense, leading to heat waves that affect people's health and agriculture. Furthermore, winters have become milder in some regions, which disturbs natural ecosystems and seasonal patterns.

Gợi ý: Your answer is well-structured and relevant. To improve further, you could add linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am very interested in visiting cities that have climates different from where I live. Experiencing diverse weather conditions, such as colder temperatures or tropical heat, can be both refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would give me the chance to enjoy winter sports and activities that are not available in my hometown.

× In contrast, winters are pleasantly mild and comfortable, making making it an ideal time to enjoy outdoor excursions without any hassle.

✓ In contrast, winters are pleasantly mild and comfortable, making it an ideal time to enjoy outdoor excursions without any hassle.

The phrase 'making making' contains a repeated word. The correct form is a single 'making' which is the present participle used to indicate cause or result. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I enjoy very cozy clothes like woolen sweaters and shipping hot beverages such as tea or coffee, which make daily chili days much more comfortable.

✓ I enjoy very cozy clothes like woolen sweaters and sipping hot beverages such as tea or coffee, which make daily chilly days much more comfortable.

The word 'shipping' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'sipping', which means to drink slowly. Also, 'chili days' is a misspelling of 'chilly days'. Correcting these improves meaning and grammatical accuracy.

× I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or sleeping on wet roads.

✓ I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or slipping on wet roads.

The verb 'sleeping' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'slipping', which means to lose balance. This correction aligns with the context of wet roads causing slips, not sleep.

× I really checked the weather forecast, but I usually do so before leaving for work, especially during rainy seasons.

✓ I really check the weather forecast, but I usually do so before leaving for work, especially during rainy seasons.

The phrase 'I really checked' is in past tense, which conflicts with the habitual action indicated by 'usually'. Changing 'checked' to 'check' aligns the verb tense with the habitual present action.

× In recent year, climate change has caused a significant impact on both the environment and human life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused a significant impact on both the environment and human life.

The phrase 'In recent year' should be plural 'years' to indicate a period of time. Using plural form is grammatically correct when referring to multiple years.

× For example, summers are become increasingly hotter and more intense, leading to heat waves that affect people's health and agriculture.

✓ For example, summers have become increasingly hotter and more intense, leading to heat waves that affect people's health and agriculture.

The phrase 'are become' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'have become' to indicate a change over time that continues to the present.

× Moreover, winters have become milder in some regions, which disturbs natural ecosystem and seasonal patterns.

✓ Moreover, winters have become milder in some regions, which disturbs natural ecosystems and seasonal patterns.

The noun 'ecosystem' should be plural 'ecosystems' to match the plural subject 'regions' and to correctly refer to multiple natural systems affected.