Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
It's quite temporary with Four Seasons. We have cold, dry winters and hot humid summers, which I find quite pleasant overall.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer cold weather actually. You can always put on more clothes to get warm, but in hot weather it's harder to cool down no matter what you do.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
Well, I feel more comfortable in dry weather. You know in wet weather my sweat can be vapor immediately and this give me a few of sticky all the time.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Yes, I check it every morning on my phone. I just take a quick look to see if I need an umbrella or a jacket for the day.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
We are definitely seeing more extreme weather, like heavier rainfall in some areas. It seems like the seasons are becoming less predictable than before.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I'd love to. I think experiencing a different climate, like a dry desert, will be a fascinating part of the travel experience.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在用词错误,如“temporary”应为“temperate”,且句子结构稍显复杂,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免拼写错误。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is temperate with four distinct seasons. We experience cold, dry winters and hot, humid summers, which I generally find quite pleasant.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且有逻辑,但可以增加连接词使表达更流畅,同时丰富细节以增强说服力。
Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer cold weather because you can always wear more layers to keep warm. In contrast, hot weather is more uncomfortable since it's difficult to cool down no matter what you do.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰,语法和用词错误较多,建议简化句子结构,使用正确的词汇,并注意语法一致性。
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I feel more comfortable. In wet weather, my sweat dries slowly, which makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,表达自然。可以尝试增加一些细节或原因,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning on my phone. I do this quickly to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or wear a jacket for the day.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且相关,但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更连贯和生动。
Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as heavier rainfall in certain regions. Additionally, the seasons seem to be less predictable than they used to be.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答积极且表达清晰,可以尝试用更丰富的词汇和连接词来增强表达效果。
Ví dụ: Absolutely, I would love to visit cities with different climates. Experiencing a unique climate, such as a dry desert, would definitely add an exciting dimension to my travel experience.
× It's quite temporary with Four Seasons.
✓ It's quite temperate with four seasons.
这里的'temporary'是错误的单词,正确的词应该是'temperate',表示气候温和。'Four Seasons'中的'Four'不需要大写,且'seasons'应为复数形式。
× You know in wet weather my sweat can be vapor immediately and this give me a few of sticky all the time.
✓ You know in wet weather my sweat can vaporize immediately and this gives me a bit of stickiness all the time.
'vapor'作为名词使用不当,应使用动词'vaporize'。'give me a few of sticky'结构错误,应改为' gives me a bit of stickiness'。动词与主语不一致,'this'是单数,动词应为'gives'。
× this give me a few of sticky all the time.
✓ this gives me a bit of stickiness all the time.
主语'this'是单数,动词应使用第三人称单数形式'gives'。
× this give me a few of sticky all the time.
✓ this gives me a bit of stickiness all the time.
'a few'用于可数名词,'sticky'是形容词,需用名词形式'stickiness',且量词应为'a bit of'。