Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答语法不正确，表达不清晰，缺乏具体细节。建议注意介词使用，丰富内容，使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I live in Inner Mongolia, which has a dry and cold climate. Winters are very cold and long, while summers are short and mild. Because of the low rainfall, the area is quite arid.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，数字表达不准确。建议使用正确的数字和语法，增加连接词，丰富细节。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I come from northern China, where the average temperature is around 6 degrees Celsius. I feel comfortable in cooler temperatures because they suit my lifestyle better.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构简单。建议使用更准确的词汇，连接词使句子更连贯，增加具体细节。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet places tend to have more insects, which I dislike. Also, in dry weather, clothes dry faster, which is very convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整但句子较长且重复。建议使用连接词简化句子，避免重复，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast between 8 and 9 a.m. on weekdays before going to work. This helps me decide what to wear and prepare for the day.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误多，表达不完整，内容不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，使用正确语法，丰富具体内容。

Ví dụ: Recently, due to deforestation in Mongolia, storms have become more frequent. This has led to an increase in respiratory diseases like asthma in my hometown. I believe the government should implement stricter environmental protections.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有误。建议注意时态和词汇准确性，使用连接词丰富句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I have lived in my hometown for about 20 years. For example, I want to travel to southern China to experience its unique landscapes and natural scenery.

× The temperature in my hometown is about 6 or maybe 212 every year.

✓ The temperature in my hometown is about 6 or maybe 21.2 every year.

这里的数字“212”显然是错误的温度表达，应该是“21.2”。此外，句子中“is”使用正确，因为描述的是一般事实。此处主要是数字错误，不属于语法错误。

× I'm very feel very comfortable about this temperature and the other.

✓ I feel very comfortable with this temperature and the others.

句中“I'm very feel”结构错误，应去掉“am”，直接用“I feel”。另外，“about this temperature and the other”表达不清，应改为“with this temperature and the others”，表示对这种温度和其他温度都感到舒适。

× I think the more wet place there may be more insect.

✓ I think the wetter the place is, the more insects there may be.

比较结构错误，应使用“the more... the more...”结构，且“wet”应用比较级“wetter”，同时“insect”应为复数“insects”。

× I don't like this kind of animals.

✓ I don't like this kind of animal.

“this kind of”后面应接不可数名词或单数名词，故“animals”应改为单数“animal”。

× when I lived in a dry place, if I want to wash clothes, they may be dry fast.

✓ When I lived in a dry place, if I wanted to wash clothes, they would dry quickly.

时态不一致，前半句用过去时“lived”，后半句应保持过去时态，“want”改为“wanted”，“may be dry fast”表达不自然，应改为“would dry quickly”。

× I have the habit of checking the weather forecast about 8:00 to 9:00 just before I go outside and I will check the weather forecast during the weekdays.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast from about 8:00 to 9:00 just before I go outside, and I check the weather forecast during the weekdays.

“about 8:00 to 9:00”应改为“from about 8:00 to 9:00”表示时间段；“I will check”与前文习惯表达不符，应改为一般现在时“I check”。

× Well, in these days, I want to say because of the cutting trees in Mongu country, more and more does the storm happened in my country.

✓ Well, these days, I want to say that because of the cutting down of trees in Mongu country, more and more storms have happened in my country.

句子结构混乱，“does the storm happened”错误，应改为“storms have happened”；“cutting trees”应改为“cutting down of trees”更准确。

× This question may lead to the increase in the diagnosis of asthma and branches in my hometown.

✓ This situation may lead to an increase in the diagnosis of asthma and bronchitis in my hometown.

“This question”用词不当，应为“this situation”；“branches”应为“bronchitis”（支气管炎），且“increase”前应加不定冠词“an”。

× I strongly believe that the government should take the.

✓ I strongly believe that the government should take action.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，应补充“take action”使句子完整。

× I have been lived in my hometown about 20 years.

✓ I have lived in my hometown for about 20 years.

“have been lived”错误，正确用法是现在完成时“have lived”；“about 20 years”前应加介词“for”。

× I really want to have a have a trip in the South of China.

✓ I really want to have a trip to the South of China.

重复“have a”错误，应去掉一个；“in the South of China”应改为“to the South of China”，表示目的地。

× I want to see the different artificial landscape and natural scenery.

✓ I want to see the different artificial landscapes and natural scenery.

“landscape”应为复数“landscapes”，且“different”后面应接复数名词；“artificial landscape”与“natural scenery”并列，保持一致性。