Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your response clearer and more natural. For example, use 'there are sometimes heavy rains' and connect ideas with 'and' or 'followed by'.

Ví dụ: The weather in Surrey is usually warm and humid, with a lot of moisture in the air. Additionally, there are sometimes heavy rains, which are often followed by snow during the winter months.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with correct grammar. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer cold weather because, when I lived in my hometown in Punjab, India, I was afraid of lizards that came out during the hot summers. Therefore, I feel more comfortable in the winter season.

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and contains awkward phrasing. Try to expand your response with clear reasons and correct expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer dry weather because it is difficult to go outside when it is raining heavily. Wet weather can be inconvenient and uncomfortable for daily activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid asking questions in your answer; instead, state your points clearly.

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast before going to college or work to know what equipment I need to bring, such as umbrellas, raincoats, or snow boots.

Gợi ý: Your answer includes relevant points but is hindered by hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically using linking words. Also, complete your sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has had adverse effects on the environment. For example, global warming has caused more frequent wildfires, which harm many animals. Additionally, the summer season has become longer than before.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is affected by hesitations and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I would love to visit other countries with different climates because I am an adventurous person who enjoys exploring various natural environments. Moreover, I want to learn how people adapt and live in those different climates.

× Moreover, there sometimes heavy rains followed by snow in the winters.

✓ Moreover, there are sometimes heavy rains followed by snow in the winters.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'there' to correctly form the existential construction 'there are'. This is necessary to indicate the existence of 'heavy rains'. Without the verb, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I usually prefer cold weather because whenever I was back in India living in my hometown Punjab Muka, I'm I was afraid of lizards which usually came out of their homes in summers, so I prefer winters.

✓ I usually prefer cold weather because whenever I was back in India living in my hometown Punjab Muka, I was afraid of lizards which usually came out of their homes in summers, so I prefer winters.

The phrase 'I'm I was afraid' contains an unnecessary and incorrect insertion of 'I'm'. The correct past tense form is 'I was afraid'. Removing 'I'm' corrects the sentence structure and maintains proper past tense usage.

× I usually prefer dry weather because it's really hard to get out in wet weather when it's raining to hourly.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather because it's really hard to get out in wet weather when it's raining hourly.

The phrase 'raining to hourly' is incorrect. The correct adverb placement is 'raining hourly' to indicate the frequency of rain. The word 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× Whenever I'm planning to go to my college and work, I usually do forecast weather in order to get the information there.

✓ Whenever I'm planning to go to my college and work, I usually check the weather forecast in order to get the information.

The phrase 'do forecast weather' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'check the weather forecast'. Also, 'there' is unnecessary and confusing in this context and should be removed for clarity.

× What equipments do I need to carry with me such as umbrellas, raincoats and snow boots, etcetera?

✓ What equipment do I need to carry with me, such as umbrellas, raincoats, and snow boots, etcetera?

'Equipments' is incorrect because 'equipment' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, commas are needed after 'me' and between items in the list for correct punctuation.

× In the past recent years, uh, there has been adverse effects of climate change on the environment, such as global warming leads to many wildlife, uh, wildfires, which further affects the animals, those who get injured or burnt in those, uh, extreme fires.

✓ In recent years, there have been adverse effects of climate change on the environment, such as global warming leading to many wildfires, which further affect the animals that get injured or burnt in those extreme fires.

'There has been adverse effects' is incorrect because 'effects' is plural, so 'have been' is needed for subject-verb agreement. 'Global warming leads to many wildlife, uh, wildfires' is awkward; 'leading to many wildfires' is better. 'Affects' should be 'affect' to agree with plural 'wildfires'. Also, 'those who get injured' should be 'that get injured' when referring to animals.

× Moreover, the summer period has extended to a great.

✓ Moreover, the summer period has extended greatly.

The phrase 'extended to a great' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct adverb form 'greatly' should be used to modify the verb 'extended' to express the extent of extension.

× Definitely, if I'll get a chance to visit other countries in order to get about the information about different climates, I would love to because I'm, uh, uh, adventurous person who loves to, uh, explore different variety of natures.

✓ Definitely, if I get a chance to visit other countries to learn about different climates, I would love to because I'm an adventurous person who loves to explore different varieties of nature.

In conditional sentences of this type, the present simple 'if I get' is used instead of 'if I'll get'. 'Get about the information' is awkward; 'learn about' is better. 'Different variety of natures' is incorrect; it should be 'different varieties of nature'. Also, 'an adventurous person' requires the article 'an' before a vowel sound.

× And in order to get the information about how people survive in those countries, I would love to get knowledge.

✓ And in order to learn how people survive in those countries, I would love to gain knowledge.

'Get the information about' is awkward; 'learn how' is more natural. 'Get knowledge' is better expressed as 'gain knowledge' for proper collocation.