Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的句子，如“hope you the day will rain”应改为“hope it will rain”。同时，回答应更简洁，避免重复。

Ví dụ: The weather in Chongqing is usually very hot. For example, after returning from the laboratory to my dormitory, I often feel sweaty. Therefore, I hope it will rain to cool down the temperature.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，应注意句子结构和时态的正确使用。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because when it is hot, I feel sweaty and uncomfortable. Moreover, in cold weather, I can wear more clothes to keep warm.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议简化句子并使用正确的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I like rain. When it rains, I still actively do my experiments, study, or play games. On the other hand, I feel uncomfortable in dry weather.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，应使用一般现在时描述习惯动作。句子结构应更简洁，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving my dormitory. For example, if it is raining, I take an umbrella and wear warmer clothes.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰且语法错误较多，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体的影响例子。

Ví dụ: In recent years, global temperatures have risen, especially in summer. This causes glaciers to melt and leads to rising sea levels.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构混乱。建议使用更连贯的句子，并明确表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit northeastern China because the cold weather there feels refreshing and comfortable. Visiting places different from Chongqing gives me a chance to experience new activities.

× when I come back dormitory from laboratory, I'm always sweaty.

✓ when I come back to the dormitory from the laboratory, I'm always sweaty.

这里缺少介词“to”，并且“dormitory”和“laboratory”前需要加定冠词“the”，因为特指具体的宿舍和实验室。

× So every day I hope you the day will rain.

✓ So every day I hope it will rain.

“hope”后面应该接“it will rain”，而不是“you the day will rain”，这里“you the day”是错误的用法。

× I prefer cold weather if the temperature will become high, although feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer cold weather if the temperature becomes high, although I feel sweaty and uncomfortable.

条件句中一般从句不使用“will”，应使用一般现在时“becomes”。另外，缺少主语“I”。

× Additionally, the temperature is low, I can wear more clothes to prevent me from freezing.

✓ Additionally, when the temperature is low, I can wear more clothes to prevent myself from freezing.

缺少连接词“when”引导时间状语从句，且“prevent me”应改为“prevent myself”，反身代词使用错误。

× I prefer wet weather because I like raining.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like rain.

“like”后面应接名词“rain”，而不是动名词“raining”。

× When it comes to rain, I always do anything actively such as carrying out my experiment, studying or playing games.

✓ When it rains, I always do things actively such as carrying out my experiments, studying, or playing games.

“When it comes to rain”表达不自然，改为“When it rains”。“do anything”应为“do things”，且“experiment”应为复数“experiments”。

× Additionally it was the weather is dry, I would feel uncomfortable and.

✓ Additionally, when the weather is dry, I feel uncomfortable.

句子结构混乱，时态错误，且结尾不完整。应使用“when”引导条件状语从句，去掉多余部分。

× Yes, I already checked the weather forecast every morning before I leave in, before leaving my house, before leaving my dormitory.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave, before leaving my house, and before leaving my dormitory.

“already checked”与“every morning”时间状语冲突，应使用一般现在时“check”。“leave in”错误，应为“leave”。

× For example, if it is raining today, I will take an umbrella and wear warmer clothes.

✓ For example, if it is raining today, I will take an umbrella and wear warmer clothes.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。

× In recent years, the days of confident exercise increasing build over days, the global temperature is spread in summer become so high, which leads to the melting of glaciers, contribute to the sea, sea level rise.

✓ In recent years, the number of days suitable for exercise has increased, and the global temperature in summer has become so high that it leads to the melting of glaciers and contributes to sea level rise.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。需要调整句子结构，使用正确的时态和连接词，使句意明确。

× Yes, I would like to visit the northeast of China, but the weather is cold, which makes me feel refreshing and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the northeast of China, where the weather is cold, which makes me feel refreshed and comfortable.

“refreshing”是形容天气的，形容人的感受应使用“refreshed”。

× Additionally, Chongqing is no less city.

✓ Additionally, Chongqing is no less a city.

缺少冠词“a”，且表达不完整，应为“no less a city”。

× Visiting the places differs from Chongqing gives me an activity opportunity.

✓ Visiting places different from Chongqing gives me an opportunity to be active.

“differs from”用法错误，应为“different from”。“activity opportunity”表达不自然，改为“opportunity to be active”。