Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и лишних слов, используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ví dụ: The weather in my country varies throughout the year. For example, spring and autumn are usually rainy, summer is very hot, and winter is beautiful with snow.

Gợi ý: Старайтесь использовать более подходящую лексику и избегать негативных выражений, таких как "disgusting". Добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer cold weather to hot because I feel uncomfortable when it's too hot. Therefore, my favorite season is winter.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более чётким и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова и избегайте повторений.

Ví dụ: I believe a balance between dry and wet weather is best because wet weather can be uncomfortable, but dry weather also has its drawbacks.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные предлоги и грамматические конструкции. Сделайте ответ более плавным и связным.

Ví dụ: I don't check the weather forecast every day, but I do when I have special events or plan to go somewhere.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более точным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте пауз и неуверенности, используйте связующие слова.

Ví dụ: I think the world is getting hotter each year due to global warming, which is a serious problem. This also causes changes in rainfall patterns.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные выражения и грамматику. Сделайте ответ более естественным и связным.

Ví dụ: Yes, I dream of visiting England because it is often rainy there. I love rainy weather, so I would like to experience it myself.

× In spring and in autumn it's rainy, uh, and summer is very, very hot in our country and winter also so beautiful with snow in our country.

✓ In spring and in autumn it's rainy, uh, and summer is very, very hot in our country and winter is also so beautiful with snow in our country.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'also so beautiful' to maintain parallel structure and correct singular verb usage for 'winter'. This is a singular and plural issue because the verb must agree with the singular subject 'winter'. Always ensure that each subject has a corresponding verb.

× I definitely go for cold weather over hot.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather over hot.

The phrase 'go for' is informal and less precise here. Using 'prefer' is more appropriate and grammatically correct to express preference. This relates to modal verb usage as it involves expressing preference or choice correctly.

× I feel overwhelmed and so disgusting in hot weather.

✓ I feel overwhelmed and so disgusted in hot weather.

The adjective 'disgusting' describes something that causes disgust, while 'disgusted' describes a feeling of being upset or repulsed. Since the speaker is describing their own feeling, 'disgusted' is correct. This is an incorrect use of adjectives issue.

× I think the balance is the key 'cause uh, often wet weather is may cause some uncomfortable and often dry weather is not too good.

✓ I think the balance is the key because often wet weather may cause some discomfort and often dry weather is not too good.

The phrase 'is may cause' is incorrect; 'may cause' should be used without 'is'. Also, 'some uncomfortable' is incorrect; the noun 'discomfort' should be used instead of the adjective 'uncomfortable'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word forms issue.

× I wouldn't say I have a habit to check whether every day, however I'm interested in to this.

✓ I wouldn't say I have a habit of checking the weather every day; however, I'm interested in this.

The phrase 'have a habit to check' should be 'have a habit of checking'. Also, 'interested in to this' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in this'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× When we had some occasions, some events, special things, when we are going to somewhere, I check it.

✓ When we have some occasions, some events, special things, when we are going somewhere, I check it.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'are going' and 'check'. To maintain consistency, present tense should be used throughout as the habit is current. This is a past tense issue.

× I think it's becoming more and more hot year by year.

✓ I think it's becoming hotter and hotter year by year.

The phrase 'more and more hot' is less natural than the comparative form 'hotter and hotter'. This is a present tense and comparative form issue.

× Uh, it's called global warming around the world and it's, uh, kind of problem, I would say huge problem.

✓ Uh, it's called global warming around the world and it's, uh, a kind of problem, I would say a huge problem.

The sentence is missing the articles 'a' before 'kind of problem' and 'huge problem'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and article errors.

× And that should be more rainy weather.

✓ And there should be more rainy weather.

The phrase 'that should be more rainy weather' is incorrect; 'there should be' is the correct existential construction. This is a 'there be' issue and incorrect use of prepositions.

× Yes, of course I have a dream to visit to England due to there is literally always rainy.

✓ Yes, of course I have a dream to visit England because it is literally always rainy there.

The phrase 'a dream to visit to England' should be 'a dream to visit England' without 'to' after 'visit'. Also, 'due to there is' is incorrect; 'because it is' is better. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× Actually I do love rainy weather and therefore I'd like to visit there and see the weather with my own owner.

✓ Actually I do love rainy weather and therefore I'd like to visit there and see the weather on my own.

The phrase 'with my own owner' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on my own' meaning alone. This is an incorrect use of pronouns issue.