Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more natural expressions and correct vocabulary. For example, instead of 'the sun is drawing', say 'the sun is very strong' or 'the sun shines brightly'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I live in Kuwait, which has a desert climate. The weather is mostly dry and hot, with the sun shining brightly almost every day.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Avoid unnecessary words like 'while' at the beginning. Also, specify your reasons to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Since I live in a desert climate, I prefer cold weather. Therefore, when I travel, I like to visit cold countries, especially in Europe, because I enjoy cooler temperatures.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and natural phrases. For example, say 'I love rainy weather' instead of 'raining weather'. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I love rainy days. For instance, I enjoy walking in the rain, which makes me feel very happy.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'It's independence'. Use clear and natural sentences with linking words to explain your habits.

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast during the winter season because it often rains. Before going out, I check the forecast to decide if I need to take an umbrella.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and correct vocabulary. For example, use 'climate' instead of 'client', and 'dry' instead of 'die'. Also, structure your sentences properly and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: I think climate change has made Kuwait's desert climate hotter and drier. Additionally, our winters have become shorter than before.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating phrases and use correct sentence structures. For example, say 'It's a cold country, and I want to see the Aurora Borealis there.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Norway because it is a cold country, and I want to see the Aurora Borealis there.

× The weather is mostly dry and hot and the sun is drawing.

✓ The weather is mostly dry and hot and the sun is shining.

The verb 'drawing' is incorrect here; the correct present participle to describe the sun emitting light is 'shining'. Use 'shining' to accurately describe the sun's action.

× While when we are in the desert climate, of course I prefer cold weather.

✓ When we are in the desert climate, of course I prefer cold weather.

The conjunction 'while' is unnecessary and incorrect when combined with 'when' here. Use only 'when' to indicate the time condition.

× So when I want to travel, I prefer to travel like cold countries.

✓ So when I want to travel, I prefer to travel to cold countries.

The preposition 'like' is incorrect when indicating destination. Use 'to' to show the place you want to travel.

× Same in Europe.

✓ The same in Europe.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'The' before 'same' to be grammatically correct.

× While I love raining weather so I will choose the wet weather, I like when I walk in under the rain and I feel like it's a very happiness moment.

✓ I love rainy weather, so I will choose wet weather. I like when I walk under the rain and I feel like it's a very happy moment.

Remove 'While' at the start as it is unnecessary. Use 'rainy' instead of 'raining' to describe weather. Remove 'in' before 'under the rain'. Use 'happy' instead of 'happiness' as an adjective to describe the moment.

× It's independence.

✓ It's independent.

'Independence' is a noun; the adjective 'independent' should be used to describe the habit.

× If, uh, we are in winter season, of course I will check the weather forecast before I go out, uh, because uh, of rainy days.

✓ If, uh, we are in the winter season, of course I will check the weather forecast before I go out, uh, because of rainy days.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'winter season' to specify the season.

× I take my umbrella with me.

✓ I take my umbrella with me.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× I think, uh, the client and the desert climate while we are on Kuwait, it's change become more hot, more die all the time and our winter it's shortly.

✓ I think, uh, the climate and the desert climate here in Kuwait have changed; it has become hotter, drier all the time, and our winter is short.

'Client' is incorrect; it should be 'climate'. Use 'here in Kuwait' instead of 'on Kuwait'. Use present perfect 'have changed' to indicate recent changes. Use 'hotter' and 'drier' as comparative adjectives. 'More die' is incorrect; 'drier' is correct. 'Winter it's shortly' should be 'winter is short'.

× Yes, I would like to visit Norway. It's a cold, It's a cold country while to seeing the Aurora there.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Norway. It's a cold country, and I want to see the Aurora there.

Remove the repeated phrase 'It's a cold'. Replace 'while to seeing' with 'and I want to see' for correct conjunction and verb form.