Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简洁直接描述天气特点，并用连词连接细节，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I live in Melbourne, where the weather changes frequently. For instance, it can feel like summer in the afternoon but become quite cold at night.

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免口语填充词，句子应更完整且语法正确。可以具体说明喜欢冷天气的原因，并用连词连接观点和理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I dislike the uncomfortable feeling of sweat sticking to my skin in hot weather.

Gợi ý: 回答应注意时态和表达准确，避免重复。可以用连词连接观点和具体描述，使内容更丰富且连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather, especially rainy days, because I enjoy staying at home, drinking tea, and watching the rain outside.

Gợi ý: 回答应避免重复和口语填充词，句子应更简洁且语法正确。可以用连词连接原因和习惯，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night before bed because the weather in Melbourne is unpredictable, so I prepare my clothes accordingly.

Gợi ý: 回答应更完整且语法正确，避免重复。应具体说明气候变化的影响，并用连词连接观点和例子，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I think the biggest effect of climate change is its impact on living creatures. For example, rising sea levels have caused some animals to lose their habitats.

Gợi ý: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，句子应更流畅自然。可以直接表达愿望并说明原因，使用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because Melbourne doesn't have snow in winter, and I want to experience snowy winters.

× Currently I live in Melbourne now and to be honest the weather in Melbourne is not really good.

✓ Currently, I live in Melbourne, and to be honest, the weather in Melbourne is not really good.

句子中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。应在“Currently”和“now”之间加逗号，并且“now”与“Currently”重复，建议去掉“now”。

× Like it changes very frequently.

✓ It changes very frequently.

句首的“Like”在这里用作口语填充词，书面语中应去掉，使句子更正式。

× For example like you will feel like it feel like you're in the summer during the afternoon but during the night you will change very cold like.

✓ For example, you will feel like you're in summer during the afternoon, but at night it becomes very cold.

句子结构混乱，时态和表达不准确。应去掉多余的“like”，调整时态和表达，使句子通顺。

× Uh for me I will say cold weather because I don't like the feeling like this.

✓ Uh, for me, I would say cold weather because I don't like this feeling.

表达偏好时，使用“would”更合适，表示假设或偏好。

× Your sweat stick it on your skin like make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ Your sweat sticks to your skin and makes me feel uncomfortable.

主语和动词不一致，“sweat”是单数，动词应为“sticks”；“stick it”重复，且“make”应为“makes”与主语一致。

× I always said wet weather, like rainy day.

✓ I always say wet weather, like rainy days.

表达习惯时应使用一般现在时“say”，而非过去时“said”；“rainy day”应为复数“rainy days”以匹配“wet weather”。

× I quite prefer the rainy day and I'm enjoying the feeling like it is raining outside but you have time to spend and stay at home and enjoy a tea and to watch the rain outside.

✓ I quite prefer rainy days, and I enjoy the feeling of it raining outside while having time to stay at home, enjoy tea, and watch the rain.

时态不一致，应统一使用一般现在时；“the rainy day”应为复数“rainy days”；句子结构复杂，需简化并调整表达。

× I check the weather forecast every day before I go to bed.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day before I go to bed.

此句无明显语法错误，符合语法规范。

× Uh, as I said, I live in Melbourne now and the weather is quite unpredictable in here, so I have to prepare preparatory clothes before I go to bed.

✓ Uh, as I said, I live in Melbourne now, and the weather is quite unpredictable here, so I have to prepare appropriate clothes before I go to bed.

“in here”应改为“here”；“preparatory clothes”用词不当，应为“appropriate clothes”表示合适的衣服。

× Think the biggest effect is like it influences the creatures on the earth for example like since the climate change the sea level rise so we some creature don't have the the land for living.

✓ I think the biggest effect is that it influences the creatures on Earth. For example, since climate change, the sea level has risen, so some creatures don't have land to live on.

缺少主语“I think”；时态错误，“sea level rise”应为“sea level has risen”；“we some creature”表达错误，应为“some creatures”；句子结构混乱需调整。

× Yes, I would since the city, the Melbourne I live doesn't have the snow during the winter.

✓ Yes, I would, since the city I live in, Melbourne, doesn't have snow during the winter.

“would”后应加逗号；“the Melbourne I live”表达不自然，应为“the city I live in, Melbourne”；“have the snow”应为“have snow”。

× So I really want to visit some city like like we'll have snow snow in the winter.

✓ So I really want to visit some cities that have snow in the winter.

“some city like like we'll have snow snow”表达重复且错误，应改为“some cities that have snow”；“like like”重复，应去掉。