Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，且内容较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和多余词汇，使用更准确的词汇描述天气情况。

Ví dụ: I live in Shanghai, where the weather is quite simple. It is usually cloudy, sometimes rainy, and occasionally sunny.

Gợi ý: 表达有些重复且语法不准确。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免口语化的填充词，并用具体原因支持观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel sluggish. Also, my hands and feet often get very cold when I stay outside for a long time.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用连词连接观点和理由，具体描述干燥和潮湿天气的感受。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather. Since Shanghai is often quite wet, especially in summer, I sometimes feel uncomfortable and sticky because of the humidity.

Gợi ý: 回答中有犹豫和重复，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子说明习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often check the weather forecast every morning before going to school. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 表达较为清晰，但有重复和语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，结构更紧凑。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused summers in Shanghai to last longer and temperatures to rise. Even in late autumn, it still feels quite warm.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误。建议直接表达愿望，说明原因，并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I find Shanghai's climate too wet and uncomfortable. Therefore, I would like to visit countries with hot and dry climates.

× Well, you know, I live in Shanghai, so the weather is here are very simple, you know, not too many difficult weather or some very serious weathers, very, uh, every day almost cloudy and sometimes rainy and a little sunny.

✓ Well, you know, I live in Shanghai, so the weather here is very simple, you know, not too many difficult weather conditions or very serious weather, very, uh, almost cloudy every day and sometimes rainy and a little sunny.

句子中出现了“the weather is here are”，这是错误的“there be”结构使用，应改为“the weather here is”。此外，“weathers”作为不可数名词不应使用复数形式。

× Well, you know, I live in Shanghai, so the weather is here are very simple, you know, not too many difficult weather or some very serious weathers, very, uh, every day almost cloudy and sometimes rainy and a little sunny.

✓ Well, you know, I live in Shanghai, so the weather here is very simple, you know, not too many difficult weather conditions or very serious weather, very, uh, almost cloudy every day and sometimes rainy and a little sunny.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”，应改为单数形式或使用“weather conditions”等表达。

× I prefer hot weather because I think cold weather will make my all the movements becoming very, very slow.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I think cold weather will make all my movements become very, very slow.

“all the movements”中“the”不合适，应去掉；“movements”应与“all”搭配使用，且“becoming”应改为动词原形“become”。

× I prefer hot weather because I think cold weather will make my all the movements becoming very, very slow.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I think cold weather will make all my movements become very, very slow.

“make”后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式“becoming”。

× And you know if people should move in the cold weather for so long time, their hands and feet may feel very freezing.

✓ And you know if people move in cold weather for a long time, their hands and feet may feel very freezing.

“for so long time”应改为“for a long time”，冠词和表达习惯错误。

× And you know if people should move in the cold weather for so long time, their hands and feet may feel very freezing.

✓ And you know if people move in cold weather for a long time, their hands and feet may feel very freezing.

“so long time”用法不当，应使用“a long time”表示较长时间。

× Absolutely. The dry weather, you know, I live in Shanghai and I think Shanghai's weather is very, not very, maybe wet, just wet.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer dry weather. You know, I live in Shanghai and I think Shanghai's weather is quite wet, not very dry.

“very, not very, maybe wet, just wet”表达混乱，应明确表达“很湿润，不干燥”。

× So I will feel very, uh, my body will feel very dirty in the, in some days of summer because the wet weather.

✓ So I will feel very uncomfortable; my body will feel very dirty on some summer days because of the wet weather.

“I will feel very, uh, my body will feel very dirty”句子结构不清，应分开表达；“in the, in some days”应改为“on some days”；“because the wet weather”应为“because of the wet weather”。

× So I will feel very, uh, my body will feel very dirty in the, in some days of summer because the wet weather.

✓ So I will feel very uncomfortable; my body will feel very dirty on some summer days because of the wet weather.

“in some days”应改为“on some days”，“because the wet weather”应改为“because of the wet weather”，介词使用错误。

× Well, not, uh, yes, I think it's very often for me to check the weather forecast because, you know, I need to go to school very early every morning.

✓ Well, yes, I think I check the weather forecast very often because, you know, I need to go to school very early every morning.

“it's very often for me to check”表达不自然，应改为“I check... very often”。

× So I need to see the weather forecast to make sure that if I need to take an umbrella with me or not.

✓ So I need to check the weather forecast to make sure whether I need to take an umbrella with me or not.

“see the weather forecast”应改为“check the weather forecast”；“make sure that if”应改为“make sure whether”，介词和连词使用错误。

× Well, it's very clearly situation, you know, in Shanghai I can clearly feel that the summers maintains for longer days than before and the temperatures are becoming higher and higher.

✓ Well, it's a very clear situation, you know, in Shanghai I can clearly feel that the summers last longer than before and the temperatures are becoming higher and higher.

“very clearly situation”应为“very clear situation”；“summers maintains for longer days”表达错误，应为“summers last longer”。

× Well, it's very clearly situation, you know, in Shanghai I can clearly feel that the summers maintains for longer days than before and the temperatures are becoming higher and higher.

✓ Well, it's a very clear situation, you know, in Shanghai I can clearly feel that the summers last longer than before and the temperatures are becoming higher and higher.

“summer”复数形式“summers”正确，但动词应与复数主语一致，故用“last”而非“maintains”。

× You know, now in Shanghai it's late autumn, it's still very high.

✓ You know, now in Shanghai it's late autumn, but the temperature is still very high.

“it's still very high”缺少主语，应明确指“temperature”，且句子需连接词“but”表示转折。

× Absolutely. You know, Shanghai's climate not very good, feel wet and not very dry when you need to wait for courses, become dry for a short time.

✓ Absolutely. You know, Shanghai's climate is not very good; it feels wet and not very dry. When you wait for classes, it becomes dry for a short time.

“Shanghai's climate not very good”缺少动词“is”；“feel wet”应为“it feels wet”；“wait for courses”应为“wait for classes”；句子结构混乱需分开。

× Absolutely. You know, Shanghai's climate not very good, feel wet and not very dry when you need to wait for courses, become dry for a short time.

✓ Absolutely. You know, Shanghai's climate is not very good; it feels wet and not very dry. When you wait for classes, it becomes dry for a short time.

“wait for courses”表达不自然，应改为“wait for classes”；“become dry for a short time”缺少主语，应加“it”。

× So I prefer to go to the hot and dry climate countries.

✓ So I prefer to go to countries with hot and dry climates.

“go to the hot and dry climate countries”表达不自然，应改为“go to countries with hot and dry climates”，介词和名词复数形式使用错误。