Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语音犹豫和重复，且用词不准确（如“clothes”应为“clouds”），建议加强发音和词汇准确性训练，避免语气词过多，回答应更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually pleasant, with clear blue skies and white fluffy clouds. However, during the rainy season, it often becomes cloudy and wet.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但部分表达不够地道，如“strip all my clothes”应为“take off some clothes”，且“work efficient”应为“work efficiency”。建议注意词汇搭配和表达准确性。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes and feel comfortable. In hot weather, I often feel dizzy and it's hard to concentrate on my work.

Gợi ý: 回答中“skin keep spinning”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的表达，如“my skin feels uncomfortable”。同时，注意语法和句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it helps me stay focused and finish my work efficiently. Also, I don't like wet weather because it makes my skin feel uncomfortable and I have to shower more often.

Gợi ý: 回答中断且表达不完整，且“scan and clothes”应为“sky and clouds”。建议练习完整表达观点，避免语音犹豫和错误词汇。

Ví dụ: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I find it inaccurate. Instead, I look at the sky and clouds to predict the weather.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语音犹豫，表达不流畅。建议练习完整句子表达，减少重复和停顿，使用准确词汇如“bad news”而非“buy news”。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused extreme weather to become more frequent and sea levels to rise, which is bad news for everyone. Governments should take measures to address these issues.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子不完整且语法有误，如“which located in the southern China”应为“which is located in southern China”。建议加强句子完整性和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to experience different climates. For example, last year I visited Guangzhou, which is located in southern China. It is more humid and warmer than my hometown, so I enjoyed the change.

× The weather where I live is quite pleasant in most of the time you can see the uh, clear and blue sky with white and fluffy clothes, uh, but sometimes you can see the cloth eye all uh, uh, besides that, uh, during the rainy season, uh, you.

✓ The weather where I live is quite pleasant most of the time. You can see the clear and blue sky with white and fluffy clouds, but sometimes you can see the cloudy sky. Besides that, during the rainy season, ...

原句中“clothes”应为“clouds”，因为这里描述的是天空中的云朵，而不是衣服。复数形式应正确使用。

× I prefer the cold weather because I can wear the thick clothes to keep warm, which makes me very comfortable.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I can wear thick clothes to keep warm, which makes me very comfortable.

“the cold weather”中的“the”不必要，且“thick clothes”前不需要冠词“the”，因为这里泛指厚衣服。

× On the other hand, during the hot weather, I can't strip all my clothes and I feel a little bit dizzy, which can't improve my work efficient.

✓ On the other hand, during hot weather, I can't take off all my clothes and I feel a little bit dizzy, which can't improve my work efficiency.

“strip all my clothes”用词不当，应为“take off all my clothes”；“work efficient”应为“work efficiency”，名词形式。

× I prefer dry weather because I can keep a clear mind so I can finish my work efficiently. Besides that, I don't want my skin keep spinning because I always need to take shower.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I can keep a clear mind so I can finish my work efficiently. Besides that, I don't want my skin to keep sweating because I always need to take showers.

“skin keep spinning”表达错误，应为“skin to keep sweating”；“take shower”应为“take showers”，复数形式。

× Uh, I don't have the habit of checking or weather forecast because because I think the weather forecast is not accurate.

✓ Uh, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I think the weather forecast is not accurate.

“checking or weather forecast”中“or”错误，应为“the”。

× So I tend to look at the scan and clothes to predict nice days, whether for example if the clouds and.

✓ So I tend to look at the sky and clouds to predict nice days, for example, if the clouds ...

“scan and clothes”应为“sky and clouds”，词汇错误。

× Uh, I, I know, I know the extreme weather become more frequent than before and the sea level increase a lot, which can be, uh, uh, buy news for everyone.

✓ Uh, I know the extreme weather has become more frequent than before and the sea level has increased a lot, which can be bad news for everyone.

“extreme weather become”应为“extreme weather has become”，时态错误；“sea level increase”应为“sea level has increased”；“buy news”应为“bad news”，词汇错误。

× Uh, and I think all the government should take some measures to.

✓ Uh, and I think all the governments should take some measures.

“all the government”应为“all the governments”，复数形式。

× Yes, I like to experience different climate. For example, last year I went to Guangzhou which located in the southern China.

✓ Yes, I like to experience different climates. For example, last year I went to Guangzhou, which is located in southern China.

“different climate”应为“different climates”，复数形式；“which located”缺少动词，应为“which is located”；“the southern China”中“the”不必要。

× It can be more humid and warmer than where I live in and I can try.

✓ It can be more humid and warmer than where I live, and I can try it.

“where I live in”中“in”多余，应去掉；句尾“and I can try”不完整，应补充宾语“it”。