Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has many fillers like 'uh' and 'like' which make it less natural. Try to be more concise and clear by directly describing the weather and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live has four distinct seasons. It is usually mild, not too hot or cold. During the rainy season, it rains quite a lot, especially in winter. Overall, the weather changes according to the season.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to express your preference clearly with reasons and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear warm clothes comfortably. In contrast, hot weather can be uncomfortable and limits clothing choices. Therefore, cold seasons are more enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to explain your preference with specific reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to stay clean and comfortable. Wet weather can make outdoor activities difficult and cause inconvenience.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many fillers and some unclear parts. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'because' to explain when and why you check the forecast. Avoid unnecessary hesitation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes check the weather forecast, especially before special occasions or festivals. It helps me stay updated and plan my activities accordingly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and lacks linking words. Try to provide a complete thought and use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid formal phrases like 'shall be conducted' in speaking.

Ví dụ: The effects of climate change are obvious because urbanization, pollution, and deforestation increase global warming. Therefore, awareness programs should inform the public about these issues.

Gợi ý: Your answer is short and contains many hesitations. Try to give a fuller response with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather and explore different natural resources.

× The weather where I live is normal, uh, like, uh, in the country there are Four Seasons and the occurrence is uh, similar and uh, it's not so bit hot, not so bit cold, but uh, it depends on how the season change.

✓ The weather where I live is normal, uh, like, uh, in the country there are four seasons and the occurrence is uh, similar and uh, it's not so hot, not so cold, but uh, it depends on how the seasons change.

The word 'Four Seasons' should be in lowercase as it is a common noun here. 'season' should be plural 'seasons' to agree with 'how the seasons change'. Also, 'so bit hot' and 'so bit cold' are incorrect; 'so hot' and 'so cold' are correct expressions.

× Uh, in rainy season, it is uh, quite raining in winter.

✓ Uh, in the rainy season, it rains quite a lot in winter.

The phrase 'in rainy season' needs the definite article 'the' to be correct. 'It is quite raining' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it rains quite a lot' to express habitual action in present tense.

× Yes, I prefer cold season weather rather than hot weather because, uh, in, in cold season, you know, uh, uh, T typically we can wear hot clothes at work here and there, but in summer you can't, you don't have any limits of that house, honey.

✓ Yes, I prefer cold season weather rather than hot weather because, uh, in the cold season, you know, typically we can wear warm clothes at work here and there, but in summer you can't; you don't have any limits in that house, honey.

The phrase 'cold season' needs the definite article 'the'. 'T typically' seems to be a typo and is removed. 'Hot clothes' is incorrect for cold weather; 'warm clothes' is appropriate. 'Limits of that house' should be 'limits in that house' for correct preposition use.

× The weather is it gets only hot and hot.

✓ The weather just keeps getting hotter and hotter.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'It gets only hot and hot' is incorrect; the comparative form 'hotter and hotter' is needed to express increasing heat.

× I prefer dry weather rather than wet because in wet weather you cannot, uh, coherent there with clean.

✓ I prefer dry weather rather than wet because in wet weather you cannot be comfortable or clean there.

The word 'coherent' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'comfortable'. Also, 'with clean' is incorrect; it should be 'be clean'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper word usage.

× Yes, I do, uh, check, uh, weather forecast sometimes, uh, especially when there is some occasions or there is some festivals, uh, in the, uh, coming uh, days.

✓ Yes, I do check the weather forecast sometimes, especially when there are some occasions or some festivals in the coming days.

'Weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. 'There is some occasions' and 'there is some festivals' are incorrect; plural nouns require 'there are'. Also, 'the coming days' is correct with the definite article.

× Uh, it keeps me updated and uh, uh, helps me decide which address and, uh, which, uh, path I can follow.

✓ Uh, it keeps me updated and helps me decide which clothes to wear and which path I can follow.

The word 'address' is incorrect in this context; likely the student meant 'clothes' or 'outfit'. The sentence is corrected to make logical sense.

× Awareness programs shall be conducted to the public, warning them about.

✓ Awareness programs shall be conducted for the public, warning them about it.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for the public' is correct. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'warning them about' needs an object, so 'it' is added.

× Yes, it will be more interesting to visit other cities, uh, looking at, uh, different weathers, uh, and uh, natural resources natural.

✓ Yes, it will be more interesting to visit other cities, uh, experiencing different weather and natural resources.

'Different weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The phrase 'natural resources natural' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'natural resources'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.