Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Faut que tu sois plus clair pis que tu utilises des phrases complètes. Par exemple, évite les erreurs comme "the coolest city of Canada" pis dis plutôt "one of the coldest cities in Canada." Aussi, évite les répétitions comme "snowing, snow falls down."

Ví dụ: I live in Winnipeg, which is one of the coldest cities in Canada. I have been living here for three years. In winter, temperatures can drop to -30 degrees Celsius. I enjoy the snow falling, but I don't like it when it gets too cold.

Gợi ý: Faut que tu sois plus organisé pis que tu utilises des mots de liaison pour rendre ta réponse plus fluide. Aussi, évite les hésitations comme "uh" pis les phrases incomplètes. Par exemple, dis "I prefer both cold and hot weather because each has its advantages."

Ví dụ: I prefer both cold and hot weather because each has its advantages. In winter, I enjoy the beautiful snow, while in summer, I can go to the beach and do activities like boating.

Gợi ý: Faut que tu corriges les erreurs grammaticales comme "a dry weather" qui devrait être "dry weather." Aussi, évite les répétitions et améliore la cohérence avec des mots de liaison.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather for several reasons. First of all, I like driving during dry winters because snowy roads can be unsafe and slippery.

Gợi ý: Faut que tu évites les répétitions comme "check the weather" plusieurs fois. Aussi, organise ta réponse avec des phrases claires et utilise des mots de liaison pour la fluidité.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day on my cell phone, especially in winter since I walk to work. This helps me dress appropriately for the weather.

Gợi ý: Faut que tu évites les hésitations comme "uh" pis que tu termines tes phrases. Aussi, sois plus précis et utilise des exemples clairs pour expliquer les effets du changement climatique.

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused unusual weather patterns. For example, sometimes it snows in summer, and winters may start later than usual, affecting people's health and activities.

Gợi ý: Faut que tu évites les répétitions comme "it's, it's" et les phrases incomplètes. Aussi, organise ta réponse avec des phrases complètes et utilise des détails précis.

Ví dụ: Definitely, I would love to visit other cities with different climates. For example, I live in Winnipeg, which is very cold now, so I would like to visit Vancouver in British Columbia, which is one of the warmest cities in Canada.

× I live in Winnipeg, it's the coolest city of Canada.

✓ I live in Winnipeg, it's the coolest city in Canada.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate belonging or location is 'in'. So, 'the coolest city in Canada' is the proper phrase.

× I like the snowing, snow falls down, however, I don't prefer too much cold.

✓ I like the snow, snow falls down, however, I don't prefer too much cold.

The verb 'snow' is incorrectly used in the '-ing' form as a noun here. 'Snow' is an uncountable noun and does not require '-ing'. Saying 'I like the snow' is correct.

× I prefer both of them. It has uh, both positive and negative impacts.

✓ I prefer both of them. They have both positive and negative impacts.

The pronoun 'It' is singular but refers to 'both', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'They' and the verb should be plural 'have'.

× I can enjoy the beauty, beautiness of the snow.

✓ I can enjoy the beauty of the snow.

The word 'beautiness' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'beauty'.

× On the other hand, uh in summer, I can go to beaches, can do more activities such as boating can go.

✓ On the other hand, in summer, I can go to beaches and do more activities such as boating.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Combining the ideas with 'and' and removing redundant phrases improves clarity.

× I definitely choose a dry weather.

✓ I definitely choose dry weather.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. Removing 'a' is necessary.

× If there is snowy roads, it would be unsafe for driving.

✓ If there are snowy roads, it would be unsafe for driving.

The subject 'roads' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× It would be sleep, more slippery.

✓ It would be slippery, more slippery.

The word 'sleep' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'slippery'. The phrase should be 'more slippery'.

× I use my cell phone to check weather every day as the winter is coming and I go to work by walking.

✓ I use my cell phone to check the weather every day as winter is coming and I go to work by walking.

The noun 'weather' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to specific weather conditions.

× I always check the web, uh, the weather outside so that I can dress myself according to that.

✓ I always check the web, uh, the weather outside so that I can dress accordingly.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is unnecessary here; 'dress accordingly' is sufficient and more natural.

× In the past years, umm, weather has, uh, very positive as well as negative effects.

✓ In the past years, umm, the weather has had very positive as well as negative effects.

The verb 'has' needs to be in present perfect 'has had' to correctly express experiences over a period of time.

× It changes, uh, frequently.

✓ It changes frequently.

Removing filler words improves clarity; the sentence is otherwise correct.

× Sometimes it's snowing during the summer and, uh, we get cold and fever, flu.

✓ Sometimes it snows during the summer and we get colds and flu.

'Snowing' is acceptable but 'snows' is more natural here. Also, 'cold' and 'fever' should be pluralized as 'colds' and 'flu' is uncountable.

× On the other hand, uh, this year winter come late and.

✓ On the other hand, this year winter has come late.

The verb 'come' should be in present perfect 'has come' to indicate an action relevant to the present.

× It's, it's freezing at the moment so far.

✓ It's freezing at the moment.

The phrase 'so far' is redundant with 'at the moment' and can be omitted for clarity.

× Now I would love to go to Vancouver in, in British Columbia, it's the warmest city in the Canada.

✓ Now I would love to go to Vancouver in British Columbia, it's the warmest city in Canada.

The article 'the' before 'Canada' is unnecessary; 'Canada' is a proper noun and does not require an article.