Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, clearly describe the weather and give specific details about temperature and conditions.

Ví dụ: I live in a city with mild weather. The temperature usually ranges from 25 to 30 degrees Celsius. In the mornings, it is often misty and cool, which makes the atmosphere very comfortable. Overall, the weather here is neither too hot nor too cold, which I really enjoy.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific about why you prefer cold weather.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer cold weather because I enjoy spending time in snowy areas. For example, I dream of visiting a place covered with snowflakes where I can build a snowman. Cold weather feels refreshing to me compared to hot weather.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and completing your thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because people tend to stay calm and focused during dry days. However, wet weather often creates a relaxing mood, which makes people less active.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and informal. Try to answer directly and clearly, avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise.

Ví dụ: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. Instead, I rely on my phone's wallpaper, which shows the current weather. This way, I can easily know if the weather is favorable or not.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and informative but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and try to elaborate a bit more with examples or consequences.

Ví dụ: I believe climate change has caused global warming and various environmental problems. For instance, rising temperatures have led to the melting of glaciers in Antarctica, which affects both humans and animals. These changes threaten ecosystems and biodiversity worldwide.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points and keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing various weather conditions broadens my perspective. It feels exciting to explore new environments and enjoy the unique atmosphere each place offers.

× So I currently live in a city where the village is quite favorable.

✓ So I currently live in a city where the climate is quite favorable.

The word 'village' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is about the weather or climate, so 'climate' is the correct adjective to describe the environment. 'Favorable' describes the climate, not the village itself.

× Like it's not too much hot or cold, the temperature ranges of about 25 to 30°, and during mornings it's often more snowy and misty rather than night.

✓ Like it's not too hot or cold, the temperature ranges from about 25 to 30°, and during mornings it's often snowier and mistier than at night.

The phrase 'too much hot or cold' is incorrect; 'too hot or cold' is correct. 'Ranges of about' should be 'ranges from about'. 'More snowy and misty rather than night' should be 'snowier and mistier than at night' to correctly compare mornings and nights.

× It offers a very comfortable atmosphere and.

✓ It offers a very comfortable atmosphere.

The sentence ends with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. The sentence should be complete and end properly.

× I usually prefer a cold weather.

✓ I usually prefer cold weather.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Therefore, 'a cold weather' is incorrect; it should be 'cold weather'.

× I'm a person who like to spend my time in snow a snow related areas.

✓ I'm a person who likes to spend my time in snow-related areas.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'who' referring to 'person'. Also, 'snow a snow related areas' is incorrect; it should be 'snow-related areas' with a hyphen and no extra 'a'.

× My biggest dream is to visit a place where there are snowflakes and we could make the snowman out of the snow.

✓ My biggest dream is to visit a place where there is snow and we can make a snowman out of it.

'There are snowflakes' is awkward; 'there is snow' is more natural. 'We could make the snowman' should be 'we can make a snowman' for present/future possibility. Also, 'the snowman' should be 'a snowman' as it is not specific.

× I prefer a dry weather rather than a wet weather because I think during dry weather people stays more calm and composed and they have an intention to do their job more steadily.

✓ I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I think during dry weather people stay calmer and more composed and they intend to do their job more steadily.

'Weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'People stays' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'stay'. 'More calm and composed' is better expressed as 'calmer and more composed'. 'They have an intention' is better as 'they intend' for natural expression.

× During a wet weather it feels so much like a resting mood rather than.

✓ During wet weather it feels more like a resting mood.

'Wet weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I'm not a person who has the habit of checking weather forecast.

✓ I'm not a person who has the habit of checking the weather forecast.

'Weather forecast' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific forecast.

× Just know that the favorable weather is there.

✓ I just know that the weather is favorable.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. Rephrasing improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I think the effects of climate change mainly include the global warming and environmental issues.

✓ I think the effects of climate change mainly include global warming and environmental issues.

'Global warming' is a general concept and does not require the definite article 'the' here.

× The global warming has created a wide range of problems, including the increasing heat and the gliding of glaciers in the Antarctic regions, which really has a serious impact on living beings and animals as well.

✓ Global warming has created a wide range of problems, including increasing heat and the melting of glaciers in the Antarctic regions, which really has a serious impact on living beings and animals as well.

'The global warming' should be 'Global warming' without 'the'. 'Gliding of glaciers' is incorrect; the correct term is 'melting of glaciers'. 'Increasing heat' does not need 'the'.

× Yes, I like to explore different places that have different climates because we should explore different weather according to my perspective as it gives you the sense and feeling feeling of of experiencing differences and it makes you feel even more good I think.

✓ Yes, I like to explore different places that have different climates because, from my perspective, we should experience different weather as it gives you the sense and feeling of experiencing differences and makes you feel even better, I think.

'Explore different weather' is awkward; 'experience different weather' is better. 'Feeling feeling of of' is a repetition error. 'Feel even more good' should be 'feel even better'. Also, sentence structure is improved with commas and rephrasing.