Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
It's hot and dry.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
No, I don't perfect very cold or very hot weather because it's very natural.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer to dry weather because the dry don't I can't feel some humid.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Yes, uh, I have the habit to check the weather forecast when I go traveling in other city I need to check the weather.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
In recent years, climate change has had profound effect on the environment and human life. In the environment we can see the weather is very.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different climates from my on way.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议增加具体描述,如季节变化或温度范围,并使用连接词使回答更自然。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually hot and dry, especially during the summer months. However, it can get cooler in the evenings, which makes it quite comfortable.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议直接表达偏好,并给出理由,使用正确的语法和词汇。
Ví dụ: I don't prefer very cold or very hot weather because extreme temperatures make me feel uncomfortable. I usually enjoy mild weather.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,表达不明确。建议简洁明了地表达偏好,并说明原因,使用正确的语法和词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling humid, which often happens when it's wet.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,语法和表达有待改进。建议补充频率和方式,使用连词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I travel to another city, so I can pack appropriate clothes. I do this almost every time I plan a trip.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且缺乏具体细节。建议补充具体影响,使用连词连接观点,使回答更完整和连贯。
Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as floods and droughts, which affect both the environment and people's daily lives.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅,语法错误明显。建议使用完整句子表达愿望,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from mine because it would be interesting to experience new weather and cultures.
× No, I don't perfect very cold or very hot weather because it's very natural.
✓ No, I don't prefer very cold or very hot weather because it's not very natural.
这里的错误是动词使用错误,'perfect' 应该是 'prefer',表示偏好。动词 'prefer' 是情态动词用法的一部分,表达喜好。建议记住常用情态动词及其正确拼写。
× I prefer to dry weather because the dry don't I can't feel some humid.
✓ I prefer dry weather because when it's dry, I don't feel humid.
这里的错误是介词和句子结构使用不当。'prefer to dry weather' 应改为 'prefer dry weather',因为 'prefer' 后直接跟名词。句子后半部分语序混乱,应调整为 'when it's dry, I don't feel humid'。建议学习常见动词搭配和句子结构。
× Yes, uh, I have the habit to check the weather forecast when I go traveling in other city I need to check the weather.
✓ Yes, uh, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. When I travel to other cities, I need to check the weather.
'have the habit to check' 应改为 'have the habit of checking',习惯用法是 'have the habit of doing something'。'go traveling in other city' 应改为 'travel to other cities',介词和复数形式使用错误。建议多学习固定搭配和介词用法。
× Yes, uh, I have the habit to check the weather forecast when I go traveling in other city I need to check the weather.
✓ Yes, uh, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. When I travel to other cities, I need to check the weather.
'other city' 应为复数 'other cities',因为表示不止一个城市。名词单复数错误。建议注意名词的单复数形式。
× In recent years, climate change has had profound effect on the environment and human life.
✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life.
'profound effect' 前缺少冠词 'a',因为 'effect' 是可数名词,单数时需要冠词。建议注意可数名词单数时冠词的使用。
× In the environment we can see the weather is very.
✓ In the environment, we can see that the weather is very changeable.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和补充说明。应补充完整句子,如 'the weather is very changeable'。建议注意句子完整性,确保主谓宾齐全。
× Yes, I would definitely like to visit city with different climates from my on way.
✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own way.
'visit city' 应为复数 'visit cities',表示多个城市。'my on way' 应为 'my own way',拼写错误。建议注意名词复数和拼写准确。