Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和不完整的句子。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式描述天气，并且注意季节的表达。

Ví dụ: The weather in my city, Nanjing, is usually comfortable and pleasant. We often have clear skies, especially in spring and autumn, which are the most beautiful seasons here.

Gợi ý: 回答中充满了犹豫和重复，表达不连贯，建议练习流利表达，减少填充词，明确表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: I don't really like either cold or hot weather because extreme temperatures make me feel uncomfortable and stressed, which can affect my health negatively.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复词汇，并且具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I am not very adaptable to wet conditions. My skin is sensitive, so living in a wet climate can cause discomfort for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫和重复，建议练习简洁明了地表达习惯和原因，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to plan my activities and ensure I have a comfortable and happy day.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议学习相关词汇和句型，清晰表达观点并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused extreme weather conditions, which negatively affect our health. For example, increased greenhouse gas emissions have led to global warming.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和不完整句子，建议练习用连贯的句子表达愿望和原因，并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience various weather conditions. For example, Thailand has a warm and pleasant climate, which is quite different from my hometown.

× Spring, winter and summer I the most beautiful.

✓ Spring, winter and summer are the most beautiful seasons.

这里缺少动词，且'spring, winter and summer'是复数，动词应使用复数形式'are'。句子应完整表达季节是最美的。

× Actually, I do not like him.

✓ Actually, I do not like it.

这里指代天气，应该用'it'而不是' him'，因为天气是无生命物体，使用中性代词'it'。

× neither of this umm weather

✓ neither of this weather

'neither'后面应接单数名词或不可数名词，'this weather'是正确表达，去掉多余的'umm'。

× this extreme weather made me feel a little bit umm UN uncomfortable and a little bit umm tense even uh that so will uh ha make a had a have a bad impact for my uh.

✓ this extreme weather makes me feel a little uncomfortable and a little tense, and it will have a bad impact on me.

时态应为一般现在时，'made'改为'makes'；'uncomfortable'拼写错误；句子结构混乱，需简化并正确使用介词'on'。

× some I'm not very, uh, adaptable, adaptable to wet weather because my skin, uh, uh, is very sensible.

✓ I'm not very adaptable to wet weather because my skin is very sensitive.

'some'多余且不合适；'sensible'应为'sensitive'，表示皮肤敏感；去除重复词汇。

× the 11 I live in a wet weather.

✓ If I live in wet weather,

'the 11'无意义，应改为条件句表达；'a wet weather'中'weather'为不可数名词，不用冠词'a'。

× It will, uh, it will not good.

✓ It will not be good.

缺少动词'be'，'not good'前应加'be'构成谓语。

× I have the habit of checking the weather every day because I need to know the weather to, to, uh, to, to know how to, well today, uh, to make sure my uh, whole day some comfortable feeling and uh, happy mood.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather every day because I need to know the weather to make sure I have a comfortable feeling and a happy mood throughout the day.

句子结构混乱，重复词语多，需简化并正确表达'whole day'的所有格和名词搭配。

× I think recent years the weather has, uh, rapid climate change.

✓ I think the weather has changed rapidly in recent years.

原句语序错误，'rapid climate change'应改为动词短语'has changed rapidly'，并将时间状语放在句尾。

× This, uh, is not very good at good for our health.

✓ This is not very good for our health.

'at'多余，应去掉。

× there is a very, uh, significant hot house now that is, umm, uh, influenced by the dark side and emitted by the.

✓ There is a very significant greenhouse effect now that is influenced by harmful factors and causes emissions.

句子不完整且表达不清，'hot house'应为'greenhouse effect'，'dark side'不明确，需用更准确表达。

× Yes, I like to visit other cities which I have different different weather some days.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities which have different weather on some days.

'which I have'错误，主语应为'cities'，动词用复数'have'；'different different'重复，应去掉一个；'some days'前加介词'on'。

× For example, in Thailand the weather is often is very pleasant and like summer, it's very.

✓ For example, in Thailand the weather is often very pleasant and like summer, it's very warm.

重复'is'错误，缺少形容词描述夏天的天气，应补充'warm'。