Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural by avoiding the phrase 'my hotel' unless you live in a hotel. Also, adding a linking word to connect the two sentences would improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I live in a place with a tropical climate, so it's quite warm and humid most of the year. Moreover, we have two main seasons: the dry season and the rainy season.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your preference well, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating 'because' and use correct verb forms. Also, linking your ideas smoothly will help.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather since I love sunshine and getting plenty of vitamin D, which positively affects my mood. Therefore, I would rather sweat than feel cold.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, 'which just brought a lot of my plans' is unclear. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because rain makes me feel extremely tired and sleepy, which has ruined many of my plans. Additionally, it worsens my mood and makes me more irritable. So, unfortunately, wet weather is not suitable for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant but contains informal language like 'wanna'. Also, adding a linking word to connect your ideas would improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Of course, I do. I almost always check the weather forecast before making my plans for the day because I want to know what to expect.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors such as 'climate become' instead of 'climate has become'. Also, using linking words to connect ideas would enhance clarity.

Ví dụ: In recent years, I think that the climate has become hotter mainly due to human activities like deforestation and forest fires, which contribute to global warming.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains unclear phrases like 'so hard countries appear to meet'. Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas logically. Also, watch for sentence structure and punctuation.

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer visiting hot countries rather than cold ones because I really enjoy beach holidays, sunbathing, seafood, and exotic fruits. Cold countries seem less appealing, especially when it's freezing cold at home.

× So yes, I would rather sweat than getting cold for sure.

✓ So yes, I would rather sweat than get cold for sure.

After 'would rather', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'getting' should be corrected to 'get'.

× I prefer dry weather because rain makes me extremely tired and sleepy, which just brought a lot of my plans.

✓ I prefer dry weather because rain makes me extremely tired and sleepy, which just ruined a lot of my plans.

The verb 'brought' is the past tense of 'bring' and does not fit the intended meaning here. The correct past participle to express that plans were negatively affected is 'ruined'.

× In recent years, I think that the climate become hotter mainly due to human activities like deforestation and forest fires, which contributes to global warming.

✓ In recent years, I think that the climate has become hotter mainly due to human activities like deforestation and forest fires, which contribute to global warming.

The present perfect tense 'has become' is appropriate to describe a change over recent years. Also, 'contributes' should be plural 'contribute' to agree with the plural subject 'activities'.

× Actually, I prefer visiting hot countries rather than cold ones because I really like beach holidays, sun bathing, seafood and exotic fruits so hard countries appear to meet, especially when it's freezing cold at home.

✓ Actually, I prefer visiting hot countries rather than cold ones because I really like beach holidays, sunbathing, seafood and exotic fruits so hard to find, especially when it's freezing cold at home.

The phrase 'so hard countries appear to meet' is incorrect. It should be 'so hard to find' to correctly express the difficulty in finding exotic fruits in cold countries. Also, 'sun bathing' should be one word 'sunbathing'.