Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles). Remove fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example. Use linking words for flow (for example, however).

Ví dụ: I live in a temperate region with four distinct seasons. For example, summers are hot and humid, while winters are snowy and cold, and spring and autumn are mild and pleasant, which makes outdoor activities possible throughout the year.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing (“captivated by common cold”). State your preference directly, give 1–2 clear reasons, and correct grammar (tenses, articles). Keep within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (because, so).

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because my body is sensitive to cold and I often catch colds. Also, warm weather makes it easier to do outdoor activities and choose clothing comfortably.

Gợi ý: Remove fillers and correct awkward phrases (“my way,” “which since it cools”). Use a short topic sentence, one clear example, and one balanced comment about occasional wet weather. Use linking words (for example, however).

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it makes activities like hiking and cycling more comfortable. For example, I can plan trips with friends without worrying about rain; however, I still enjoy occasional rain because it cools the air and refreshes the environment.

Gợi ý: Use natural verbs (check the forecast), correct articles and prepositions, and finish sentences fully. Give specific frequency and one clear reason. Avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I leave and again in the evening if I have plans for the next day. I do this because it helps me decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella, and I usually use a reliable weather app for updates.

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more specific: avoid vague or incorrect collocations (‘erupted communities’). Start with a topic sentence naming key effects, then give one or two concrete examples and use linking words (for instance, consequently).

Ví dụ: Climate change has increased the frequency of extreme events such as floods, storms and heat waves. For instance, more intense storms damage infrastructure and rising temperatures lead to longer heatwaves, which strain health services and agriculture.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and vocabulary errors (capitalization, spelling: 'A' → 'a', 'skying' → 'skiing'), avoid unclear endings. Give a concise topic sentence, one concrete example of activities, and a clear concluding phrase.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit places with very different climates because it would let me enjoy new landscapes and activities. For example, escaping a humid tropical summer to a snowy city would let me try skiing and visit winter markets, which would broaden my perspective on local culture.

× I live in a region that has temperate climate where we experience all Four Seasons.

✓ I live in a region that has a temperate climate where we experience all four seasons.

Article error and capitalization: 'temperate climate' requires the indefinite article 'a' because we refer to one type of climate in general. 'Four Seasons' should be lowercase 'four seasons' as it is a common noun phrase, not a proper noun.

× Summer are hot and humid, whereas winter are snowy and cold.

✓ Summer is hot and humid, whereas winter is snowy and cold.

Subject-verb agreement: 'summer' and 'winter' are singular nouns here referring to the season in general, so they require singular verbs 'is' rather than 'are'. Alternatively plural forms 'summers' and 'winters' could take 'are' if speaking about multiple years.

× Uh, autumn and springs are mild and pleasant.

✓ Uh, autumn and spring are mild and pleasant.

Number agreement: mix of singular and plural ('autumn and springs') is inconsistent. Use either both singular ('autumn and spring') or both plural ('autumns and springs') depending on meaning. Here listing two seasons uses singular forms.

× Uh, this allows people to experience outdoor activities throughout the year.

✓ This allows people to enjoy outdoor activities throughout the year.

Word choice and clarity: 'experience outdoor activities' is understandable but 'enjoy outdoor activities' is more natural collocation. No major grammatical tense change required.

× So I basically I am a person who is easily captivated by common cold and fever.

✓ So basically I am a person who is easily affected by the common cold and fever.

Incorrect collocation and article usage: 'captivated by' is wrong in this context; 'affected by' or 'prone to' is appropriate. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'common cold' when referring to the illness in general.

× So I usually prefer hot weather because of my body temperature.

✓ I usually prefer hot weather because of my body temperature.

Redundancy and tense: remove redundant 'So' at start for conciseness. Present simple 'prefer' is correct to state habitual preference.

× In summer I can do outdoor activities as well as I can wear any type of clothes and it I will not get any sort of diseases or illness during hot weather.

✓ In summer I can do outdoor activities and wear any type of clothes, and I usually do not get diseases or fall ill during hot weather.

Run-on sentence and incorrect article/plural: combine clauses with conjunctions, remove extra 'it', change 'any sort of diseases or illness' to 'diseases or fall ill' for natural phrasing and correct singular/plural usage.

× Due to my body temperature, I prefer hot weather.

✓ Because of my body temperature, I prefer hot weather.

Preposition choice: 'Due to' is often used for causes modifying nouns; 'because of' is more natural for whole-sentence reason. Both are grammatically acceptable but 'because of' fits better here.

× I usually prefer dry weather because it makes outdoor activities like hiking or cycling more convenient and comfortable.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather because it makes outdoor activities like hiking or cycling more convenient and comfortable.

No grammar change needed; sentence is correct. Note: original had capital 'For' in next sentence; ensure proper capitalization in continuous text.

× Uh, For example, I can plan on activities, uh, with my friends without worrying about rain.

✓ For example, I can plan activities with my friends without worrying about rain.

Preposition and redundancy: 'plan on activities' is incorrect; use 'plan activities' or 'plan for activities'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas for clarity.

× Uh, there will not be any fear of my way, my clothes getting wet or dirty because of rain.

✓ There is no fear of my clothes getting wet or dirty because of rain.

Pronoun and phrasing: 'fear of my way' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'my clothes' directly. Use present simple 'is' for general statements.

× However, I do appreciate occasional wet weather which since it cools.

✓ However, I do appreciate occasional wet weather since it cools things down.

Sentence fragment and word order: 'which since it cools' is ungrammatical. Use 'since it cools things down' to give a clear reason and complete the clause.

× Yes, I usually examine weather forecast every morning before leaving the house and again in the evening if I have any plans in the next day.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house and again in the evening if I have plans for the next day.

Article and verb choice: use 'the weather forecast' (definite article), and 'check' is more natural than 'examine'. 'Plans for the next day' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I do this because it helps me to decide what to wear and and whether I can carry umbrella or not.

✓ I do this because it helps me decide what to wear and whether I should carry an umbrella or not.

Double 'and' removed, infinitive 'to' after 'helps me' can be omitted, add article 'an' before 'umbrella', and use 'should' for natural modal phrasing.

× For example, if I'm planning any outdoor activities with my friends, I usually prefer checking weather forecast apps or.

✓ For example, if I'm planning any outdoor activities with my friends, I usually check weather forecast apps.

Incomplete sentence and verb form: 'prefer checking' is acceptable but simpler 'usually check' is natural. Remove trailing 'or' that leaves sentence incomplete and add article 'the' if needed.

× In recent years, climate change has caused several weather events like floods, storms and heat waves which have erupted communities and infrastructure.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused several weather events like floods, storms, and heat waves which have damaged communities and infrastructure.

Wrong verb choice: 'erupted' is not used with 'communities and infrastructure'. Use 'damaged' or 'disrupted'. Present perfect 'has caused' is correct; change verb to appropriate past participle meaning.

× Additionally, the weather patterns have also been changed where we cannot address what sort of weather change or weather forecasts have been done.

✓ Additionally, weather patterns have also changed, so we cannot predict what sort of weather will occur or how accurate forecasts will be.

Tense and word choice: 'have been changed' is passive and awkward; active 'have changed' is better. 'Cannot address' is incorrect—use 'cannot predict'. Clarify future occurrence with 'will occur' and improve 'weather forecasts have been done' to 'how accurate forecasts will be'.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing contrasting weather helps me appreciate diverse landscapes and culture.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing contrasting weather helps me appreciate diverse landscapes and cultures.

Number agreement with 'culture': plural 'cultures' matches 'landscapes' and the general idea of multiple places having different cultures.

× For example, escaping A humid tropical summer to enjoy cool, snowy city would be refreshing.

✓ For example, escaping a humid tropical summer to enjoy a cool, snowy city would be refreshing.

Article and capitalization: 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and articles are needed before 'humid tropical summer' and 'cool, snowy city' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, such trips allow me to try new activities like skying or visiting botanical gardens in spring, and they broaden my perspective by exposing me to different ways people even add up to their.

✓ Moreover, such trips allow me to try new activities like skiing or visiting botanical gardens in spring, and they broaden my perspective by exposing me to different ways people live and add to their lives.

Spelling and sentence structure: 'skying' is misspelled; correct form is 'skiing'. The latter clause was ungrammatical ('different ways people even add up to their'); replace with 'different ways people live and add to their lives' for clarity and correct verb forms.