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Part 1

Giám khảo

What's the weather like where you live?

Thí sinh

Hot, very hot. I live in Jiangxi, Gangzhou in South for China.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer cold or hot weather?

Thí sinh

Hot weather, I guess I don't like wear a lot of clothes.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

Thí sinh

Well, which absolutely I don't like dry air. Well, let me uncomfortable.

Giám khảo

Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?

Thí sinh

I will be checking the weather forecast every day.

Giám khảo

What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?

Thí sinh

Summers are getting longer and temperatures are rising every year.

Giám khảo

Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I want to do that because I like a long summer.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

What's the weather like where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但语法和表达不够自然,需要纠正地名和语序,并补充少量细节使回答更完整。建议用一到两句表述地点与气候,再补一句具体感受或例子。注意地点顺序(城市在前,国家在后)和冠词/介词用法。

Ví dụ: It's very hot where I live. I live in Ganzhou, Jiangxi province in southern China, and summers there can be extremely humid and sunny.

Do you prefer cold or hot weather?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但语法错误较多,表达不够自然。应先给出明确主题句,然后用原因支持,注意动词形式和词序(例如 'I don't like wearing many clothes')。可加入一条过渡连接词使语意连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable. I don't like wearing many layers, so warm temperatures suit me better.

Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误和重复填充词。需要直接给出偏好(dry or wet),并用一到两句说明原因,避免无谓填充词如 'well' 过多。注意形容词使用('uncomfortable' 而非 'let me uncomfortable')。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because dry air makes me feel uncomfortable, especially in winter when my skin gets very dry.

Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答意思清楚但时态使用不当,显得不自然。应使用一般现在时表示习惯('I check'),并补充具体时间或方式(比如通过手机应用或早上)。这样更符合对话习惯并更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning on my phone so I can plan what to wear.

What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁且相关,但可以更具体并用连接词扩展说明影响,例如对农业、健康或自然灾害的影响。建议在主句后加入一两项具体结果来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I think summers are getting longer and temperatures are rising, which has led to more heatwaves and droughts that affect crop yields and people's health.

Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但理由不合逻辑(想去气候不同的城市却因为喜欢长夏)。建议先明确想去与否,再给出合理原因或举例说明你想体验的气候特点,同时用连接词让句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience milder winters and cooler summers, such as visiting coastal cities or higher-altitude regions.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I live in Jiangxi, Gangzhou in South for China.

I live in Gangzhou, Jiangxi, in the south of China.

句子中介词与词序使用不当。“Gangzhou” 和 “Jiangxi” 的顺序更自然为 城市在前、省在后;表示位于国家的南部应使用介词短语“in the south of China”。建议将地名顺序调整为“Gangzhou, Jiangxi”,并用“in the south of China”表示“在中国的南方”。

Third person singular issue

× Hot, very hot.

It is hot, very hot.

作为回答天气的句子需要完整句子结构,缺少主语和系动词。应使用“It is”来描述天气。建议在类似回答中使用完整的主语+系动词结构:"It is..."。

Modal verb usage

× Hot weather, I guess I don't like wear a lot of clothes.

In hot weather, I guess I don't like to wear a lot of clothes.

原句缺少介词短语引导时间状语,且动词不定式结构不完整。应使用“In hot weather” 表示在……情况下;动词“like”后面接不定式“to wear”或动名词“wearing”。建议改为“In hot weather, I guess I don't like to wear a lot of clothes.” 或 “I don't like wearing a lot of clothes in hot weather.”

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, which absolutely I don't like dry air. Well, let me uncomfortable.

Well, actually I absolutely don't like dry air. It makes me uncomfortable.

句中“which”使用错误,应使用副词“actually”或“absolutely”修饰;“let me uncomfortable”是错误的代词/结构,正确应为“It makes me uncomfortable” 使用形式主语或宾语结构表达“让我不舒服”。建议学习常用表达“It makes me ...”来表达某事使某人感到如何。

Future tense issue

× I will be checking the weather forecast every day.

I check the weather forecast every day.

回答习惯性动作应使用一般现在时而不是将来进行时。使用“will be checking”强调将来持续动作,不符合提问“when and how often”。因此应用“I check...every day”。

Present tense issue

× Summers are getting longer and temperatures are rising every year.

Summers are getting longer and temperatures are rising.

句子本身语法正确,但与时间副词“every year”重复性和时态可以简化。保留现在进行时表持续变化即可。若要强调逐年变化可写“temperatures are rising year by year.” 建议根据需要选择表达,注意冗余副词。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do. I want to do that because I like a long summer.

Yes. I would like to. I want to do that because I like long summers.

对将来愿望或意愿的回答更自然用“would like to”而非简单“Yes, I do”。另外“a long summer”在泛指时应使用复数“long summers”或“不加冠词的单数”根据语境,“I like long summers”更自然。建议使用“would like to”表礼貌愿望,并把“a long summer”改为“long summers”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DryArid; Parched; Thirsty; Dull; Unemotional
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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