Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并直接给出主题句，然后用1-2个具体细节支撑。避免重复（如“wet”多次出现），使用恰当的连接词使表述更连贯。可以描述降雨频率、温度或典型影响以增加具体性。

Ví dụ: It depends on the season. Right now it's spring and it's quite rainy and humid, so people often carry umbrellas and the streets stay damp for most of the day.

Gợi ý: 先给出明确立场的主题句，再补充1-2个具体原因支持（例如舒适感、活动或衣着方便）。避免口头禅（well, you know）以显得更自然。保持句子数量在5句以内。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather. Winters in my city are mild and cozy, which makes it pleasant to go out in a light coat and enjoy warm drinks, so I find it more comfortable than hot summers.

Gợi ý: 句子不够清晰，包含语法和逻辑错误（如“my skiing will get itchy”不合适）。先表明偏好，然后用合理具体的原因（例如习惯、植物生长、气候影响）说明。避免与题意无关或错误的比喻。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I grew up in a coastal city and I'm used to the humidity. The rain keeps the plants green and I feel more comfortable in that climate.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且具体，可以补充检查的方式和频率（例如每天早上用手机应用或晚上查看），以及这样做的具体原因。减少口头填充词，使表述更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the forecast every morning on my phone because the temperature varies a lot during the day, and I need to plan my clothes and activities accordingly.

Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理，给出具体影响（如更频繁的热浪、暴雨、海平面上升或农业影响），并用连接词组织观点。避免重复相同表述，提供一两个例子支撑观点。

Ví dụ: I believe summers have become hotter and heatwaves are more frequent, which affects people's health and increases energy use; for example, my city has seen longer periods of very high temperatures in recent years.

Gợi ý: 先给出明确回答，再说明原因和具体计划（如时间、想做的活动）。句子要完整，避免语法错误和不完整句。可以加入对比说明为什么想去不同气候的城市。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I would like to visit Harbin in winter to experience heavy snowfall and ice festivals, which are very different from the mild, humid winters of my hometown.

× Well, you know, it really depends on season.

✓ Well, you know, it really depends on the season.

句子缺少定冠词“the”。在表示特定的名词“season（季节）”时，英语通常需要定冠词“the”。建议在“season”前加“the”。 (因为题目指代的是“季节”这一概念或当前语境下的季节。)

× Currently it is spring now and the weather is rainy and the weather is really moist here and everyone was wet.

✓ Currently it is spring now and the weather is rainy and really moist here, and everyone is wet.

句中时态和重复用词问题：1) “everyone was wet” 与前面一般现在时描述不一致，应使用现在时“is wet”。2) “the weather is rainy and the weather is really moist” 重复“the weather”，可简化为“the weather is rainy and really moist”。建议保持时态一致并减少重复。

× It's wet. Everything is wet.

✓ It's wet. Everything is wet.

句子本身无复数/单数错误，保留原句即可。此处不需要修改。 (提示：虽然句子重复，但在口语中可用于强调。)

× Well, I prefer cold weather in my city.

✓ Well, I prefer cold weather in my city.

此句时态与结构正确，无需修改。保持一般现在时表达偏好。

× Well, you know, my city is a SE city in China, so the winter here isn't very cold, but it's rather cozy, you know, So I prefer the winter.

✓ Well, you know, my city is a southeastern city in China, so the winter here isn't very cold but is rather mild, so I prefer winter.

原句中“SE city”不自然，应改为“southeastern city”。另外“cozy”通常用于描述房间或氛围，形容冬天用“mild（温和）”更恰当。句内标点和大小写有问题（“So”不应大写），建议连贯处理并保持主谓一致。

× Well, I prefer wet weather since I am living in coastal city since I was born.

✓ Well, I prefer wet weather since I have been living in a coastal city since I was born.

问题：1) “living in coastal city” 缺少不定冠词“a”。2) 时态选择上表示从过去到现在持续的动作应使用现在完成进行时或现在完成时，例如“have been living”；也可以用简单现在完成“have lived”。建议使用“have been living in a coastal city since I was born”。

× I am used to the moist weather in my city so I think my skiing will get itchy.

✓ I am used to the moist weather in my city, so I think my skin will get itchy.

问题：1) “moist weather” 可以接受，但“moist”多用于物体或皮肤，描述天气更常用“humid”。建议用“humid weather”。2) “my skiing will get itchy” 是不合逻辑的搭配，应该是“my skin will get itchy”。建议修改为“I am used to the humid weather in my city, so I think my skin will get itchy.”。

× So it is a necessity for me to check weather every day.

✓ So it is a necessity for me to check the weather every day.

在“check weather”前需要定冠词“the”来指代天气预报这一特定对象。建议改为“check the weather every day”。

× Well, I think it is the hotter weather in the summer, especially in the summer.

✓ Well, I think the weather has been getting hotter in summer, especially in recent years.

原句重复“in the summer, especially in the summer”且时态不准确。讨论近年气候变化应使用现在完成进行或现在完成时，表示变化趋势："has been getting hotter" 或"has become hotter"，并省略重复短语。建议改为“the weather has been getting hotter in summer”并加上时间范围如“in recent years”。

× Well in my city, from my observation, the weather in my city is getting hot, hotter and hotter year after year.

✓ Well, in my city, from my observation, the weather is getting hotter year after year.

句子有重复“in my city”和啰嗦“hot, hotter and hotter”。保持简洁，用“is getting hotter year after year” 更自然，时态用现在进行短语表示逐年变暖趋势。

× Well, definitely, yes. I have been longing to visit Harbin. Where is the northeast city in China? I want to visit there in winter so I can see the snow falling down from the.

✓ Well, definitely. I have been longing to visit Harbin, which is a city in the northeast of China. I want to visit there in winter so I can see the snow falling down.

问题：1) “Where is the northeast city in China?” 语序和表达错误，应为定语从句“which is a city in the northeast of China”。2) 最后“falling down from the.” 不完整，应去掉“from the”或补充来源。建议把句子合并并修正为“Harbin, which is a city in the northeast of China. I want to visit there in winter so I can see the snow falling down.”。