Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the typical weather, then give one or two specific supporting details (seasons, temperature, frequency of snow) using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually very cold and snowy during the winter. For example, it often snows several times a week from November to March, so temperatures stay below freezing. However, I enjoy rainy or wet days in spring because they make the air feel fresh and calm.

Gợi ý: Make the preference statement clear and give concise reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct grammar (avoid repeated phrases). Limit to 2–3 supporting details explaining why you prefer hot weather.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I can wear lighter, more attractive clothes and feel more comfortable outdoors. Also, I don’t have to layer many items, which makes dressing easier and less restrictive.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary and reasons. Replace unclear words (e.g. 'vendor') with correct terms. Give specific, relevant reasons why you prefer dry weather and structure the answer with a topic sentence plus 2 supporting details connected by linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to stay clean and active. For instance, rainy days often make shoes and clothes muddy, and wet conditions can dirty the house, so I find dry days more convenient for going out.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with frequency and purpose, using complete sentences. Say when you check (e.g. every morning) and why (to decide transport or clothing). Use linking words to show routine and conditional actions, and finish your sentence logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before I go to work. I do this so I can decide whether to take public transport or drive and to choose appropriate clothing; for example, if it looks rainy I bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear main idea about specific effects (e.g. temperature rise, extreme weather, sea level). Use one or two concrete examples and link them logically. Avoid vague or unrelated statements (like 'noise').

Ví dụ: I believe climate change has caused more frequent heatwaves and heavier storms in recent years. For example, summers are getting hotter with record temperatures, and we also see stronger rainstorms that cause flooding in some areas.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific examples of climates you'd like to experience and reasons (e.g. activities, scenery). Correct vocabulary (e.g. 'cold' not 'gold') and state one or two places and what attracts you there.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit places with very different climates, such as a dry desert or a snowy mountain town. For instance, I want to see a snowy city because I enjoy winter sports, and I’d also like to visit a warm tropical place to experience different plants and beaches.

× The weather like where I am live is extremely cold for many days like snow is most of the times as compared to hot weather rainy spring.

✓ The weather where I live has been extremely cold for many days; it has snowed most of the time compared with hot or rainy springs.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order ('where I am live'), tense and aspect ('is extremely cold for many days' should use present perfect 'has been' to indicate a condition continuing up to now), and awkward comparisons. The sentence also uses 'like' incorrectly and mixes ideas. Use 'where I live' (correct word order), 'has been' for a period continuing to present, and rephrase the comparison clearly. Be concise and link clauses with punctuation or conjunctions. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× But I like the wet weather because it makes me feel good.

✓ However, I like wet weather because it makes me feel good.

The original begins with 'But' and uses 'the wet weather' awkwardly. Use 'However' or start a new sentence; drop 'the' before general nouns like 'wet weather.' This corrects article and style. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× I prefer hot weather. In hot weather I usually wear good looking dress as compared to in hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather. In hot weather I usually wear good-looking clothes.

Redundant and incorrect repetition 'as compared to in hot weather' creates confusion. 'Good looking' should be hyphenated as 'good-looking' when used as a compound adjective and 'dress' should be plural 'clothes' for general reference. Remove unnecessary comparison. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I want.

✓ I want to wear lighter clothes.

'I want.' is a fragment because it lacks an object or clause. Provide a full verb phrase describing what is wanted. Use 'to' + verb after 'want.' Grammar problem type ID: 23

× In cold weather I want to so many clothes to protect from the cold.

✓ In cold weather I need to wear many clothes to protect myself from the cold.

'want to so many clothes' is ungrammatical. Use 'need to wear' or 'have to wear' with plural 'many clothes.' Add reflexive pronoun 'myself' after 'protect' or include 'from the cold.' This fixes verb choice and missing pronoun. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× I prefer dry vendor as compared to wet weather because in dry weather we drink lots of water as compared to wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because in dry weather we drink a lot of water.

'Vendor' is the wrong word; use 'weather.' Use 'prefer X to Y.' 'Lots of' is informal; 'a lot of water' is acceptable. Remove redundant 'as compared to wet weather.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Wet weather makes our clothes dirty, shoes dirty and our house then our house also become dirty due to bed.

✓ Wet weather makes our clothes and shoes dirty, and our house also becomes dirty because of mud or dampness.

The original repeats 'our house' and uses 'due to bed,' which is unclear. Use parallel structure ('clothes and shoes') and correct verb form 'becomes.' Specify cause ('mud' or 'dampness') instead of 'bed.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I have it too.

✓ Yes, I do.

'I have it too' is vague for the question about a habit. Use 'I do' to indicate you have the habit. This corrects pronoun and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I have the habit of checking weather forecast when I usually go to the work.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast when I usually go to work.

Add definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast.' Remove 'the' before 'work' in the idiomatic phrase 'go to work.' Also place 'usually' before the verb or after 'I' for natural order: 'when I usually go to work.' Grammar problem type ID:17

× I often use daily basis whether that the weather is good outside to travel with the public transport or with the car.

✓ I often check the weather on a daily basis to see whether it is good enough to travel by public transport or by car.

The phrase 'use daily basis' is incorrect; use 'on a daily basis.' 'Whether that the weather is good outside' is ungrammatical; use 'to see whether it is good enough.' Use 'travel by public transport' or 'by car.' Grammar problem type ID:20

× If there is a good weather then I.

✓ If the weather is good, I go by public transport or drive to work.

Original is a fragment. Use a complete clause after 'I.' Use 'the weather' (not 'a good weather') and add the action that follows. Grammar problem type ID:23

× Yes, I think, yes, I think so many facts change in recent years.

✓ Yes, I think many things have changed in recent years.

'So many facts' is unnatural; use 'many things' or 'many aspects.' Use present perfect 'have changed' to describe changes that occurred over a period up to now. Grammar problem type ID:6

× In the climate, for example, nowadays there is no less noise compared to previous year.

✓ For example, in terms of climate, there is more noise nowadays than in previous years.

'No less noise' is awkward; likely meant 'more noise.' Use 'than' for comparisons and plural 'previous years' for a period. Reorder to natural English: 'there is more noise nowadays than in previous years.' Grammar problem type ID:19

× Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have different climate from my city from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other countries that have a different climate from the city where I live.

Use 'a different climate' (singular) to match 'climate' and add 'the city' or 'my city.' Remove duplicate 'from.' Correct word order to 'the city where I live.' Grammar problem type ID:1

× In Vancouver there is a gold as well as rainy climate and in my home country there is a hot climate.

✓ In Vancouver there is a mild and rainy climate, and in my home country there is a hot climate.

'Gold' is incorrect; probably meant 'mild.' Use 'mild and rainy climate' and include 'a' before 'hot climate.' Use parallel structure and commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13