Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“themes”应为“things”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单复数和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks when I feel stressed or upset. Currently, I have a very demanding job, so I often feel overwhelmed. At those times, I tend to reach for sweet treats to improve my mood and boost my happiness.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“seems”应为“snacks”，“helps”应为“help”，且表达不够连贯。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. When I feel stressed or under pressure, I eat sweet snacks like chocolate and cakes because they help improve my mood and boost my happiness. Also, I find that occasionally eating snacks helps me concentrate on my work.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，如“because my parents”后缺少谓语，且“think it are”应为“think it is”。建议注意句子完整性和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my parents didn't allow me to eat junk food like chocolate and candy. They thought it was not good for my health, so they preferred me to eat healthier foods like fruit.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇和语法错误，如“my healthy”应为“my health”，“in no sugar and calories”表达不准确，且“a hand of nuts”应为“a handful of nuts”。建议使用正确的表达方式和词汇。

Ví dụ: Because I care about my health, I usually choose snacks with no sugar and low calories, such as fresh fruits like apples and bananas, and a handful of nuts. These snacks are not only safe but also provide essential nutrients.

× I always feel stressed or overwhelmed at those time.

✓ I always feel stressed or overwhelmed at those times.

“time”在这里表示多个时刻，应使用复数形式“times”。

× I tend to reach some sweet themes to improve my mood and help me boost my happiness.

✓ I tend to reach for some sweet things to improve my mood and help me boost my happiness.

“themes”应为“things”，且“reach”后应加介词“for”表示“去拿”。

× they can helps me to improve my mood and uh boost my happiness.

✓ they can help me to improve my mood and uh boost my happiness.

情态动词“can”后动词应为原形，不能加“s”。

× I found it some snacks occasionally will helps me to concentrate my work.

✓ I found that some snacks occasionally will help me to concentrate on my work.

“will”后动词应为原形“help”，且“concentrate”后应加介词“on”。

× They think it are not good for my health.

✓ They thought it was not good for my health.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时，“think”改为“thought”，“are”改为“was”。

× Therefore they prefer me to eat some healthier food like fruit.

✓ Therefore they preferred me to eat some healthier food like fruit.

动词时态应与上下文一致，且“prefer”过去式为“preferred”。

× Because I care about my healthy, I usually choose snacks in no sugar and calories for such as the fresh food like apples and banana and a hand of nuts.

✓ Because I care about my health, I usually choose snacks with no sugar and calories, such as fresh food like apples, bananas, and a handful of nuts.

“healthy”应为名词“health”；“in no sugar and calories”应改为“with no sugar and calories”；“for such as”错误，应直接用“such as”；“banana”应为复数“bananas”；“a hand of nuts”应为“a handful of nuts”。

× Uh, these snacks are not only safety but also have the essential nutrition.

✓ Uh, these snacks are not only safe but also have essential nutrition.

“safety”是名词，形容词应为“safe”；“the essential nutrition”中“the”不必要且“nutrition”不可数，去掉“the”。