Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に対して直接的ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「after the schools」は不自然で、「after school」が正しいです。また、動詞の時制や単数・複数の一致に注意が必要です。回答は5文以内にまとめ、より自然で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks on my way to the station after school. My friends and I often buy snacks at the convenience store. We usually choose potato chips and ice cream. Sometimes, if we have enough money, we also buy smoothies.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に対して適切に答えていますが、表現がやや単調で繰り返しが見られます。また、「body health」は不自然な表現で、「health」や「body」だけで十分です。より多様な語彙を使い、理由や具体例を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the type of snacks you eat. For instance, potato chips are unhealthy because they contain a lot of fat and salt. However, ice cream made from fresh fruit and ice can be a healthier option because it provides vitamins and is low in fat.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「It's not every day I can only eat my snacks」は不自然で、「I could only eat snacks when my friend came to my house to play video games」が適切です。また、感情表現も自然に表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young. I could only eat snacks when my friends came to my house to play video games. I really enjoyed those moments because it was special to have snacks and play games together.

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法や語彙の誤りも多いです。「stay in fit」は不自然で、「stay fit」が正しいです。また、「it is not early」は意味が不明瞭です。回答は完結にし、正しい表現で具体的な理由を述べましょう。

Ví dụ: I like to eat ice cream made from organic and fresh fruits because it helps me stay fit. It is healthy and tastes delicious, so I enjoy it very much.

× I usually eat my snacks on the way to the station after the schools.

✓ I usually eat my snacks on the way to the station after school.

'After the schools' is incorrect because 'school' here refers to the general time period, not multiple schools. The correct preposition phrase is 'after school' to indicate the time after classes end.

× We buy the snacks at the convenience store and be usually buy potato chips and ice creams and also we buy some smoothies if we had enough money to buy it.

✓ We buy snacks at the convenience store and usually buy potato chips and ice cream, and also we buy some smoothies if we have enough money to buy them.

The definite article 'the' before 'snacks' and 'convenience store' is unnecessary here because we are talking about snacks and stores in general. Also, 'be usually buy' is incorrect; it should be 'usually buy'. 'Ice creams' should be singular 'ice cream' when referring to the food in general. 'If we had' should be 'if we have' to match the present tense context. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'smoothies'.

× But if you eat some ice cream which is made from only fruit and ice, it is very good for your health.

✓ But if you eat some ice cream which is made only from fruit and ice, it is very good for your health.

The phrase 'made from only fruit and ice' is awkward; 'made only from fruit and ice' is the correct placement of 'only' to modify the phrase properly.

× No, I didn't. It's not every day I can only eat my snacks when my friend came to my home and play some video games.

✓ No, I didn't. I could only eat my snacks when my friend came to my home and played some video games.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'It's not every day I can only eat' should be past tense 'I could only eat'. Also, 'play' should be past tense 'played' to match 'came'.

× I'm very enjoy that moment because that is the only day I can eat snacks and also play a game.

✓ I really enjoyed that moment because that was the only day I could eat snacks and also play games.

'I'm very enjoy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I really enjoyed' to express past enjoyment. Also, 'play a game' is better as 'play games' in this context.

× So I'm delighted with this.

✓ So I was delighted with this.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb tense should be past 'was' instead of present 'am'.

× I love to eat ice cream which is only made from organic and fresh fruits because it is very good to stay in fit and also it is not early so it doesn't hurt my body health and also the taste is amazing so I.

✓ I love to eat ice cream which is made only from organic and fresh fruits because it is very good for staying fit, and it is not unhealthy, so it doesn't hurt my health. Also, the taste is amazing.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'only made from' is better than 'made only from' but both are acceptable; 'stay in fit' is incorrect, should be 'staying fit'; 'it is not early' is incorrect and unclear, likely meant 'it is not unhealthy'; 'my body health' should be 'my health'; the sentence ends abruptly with 'so I' which is incomplete and removed for clarity.