Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I have love Snack King" and "My favorite snacks are food and nuts." Try to use correct verb forms and be more specific about the snacks. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, between lunch and dinner. I have loved Snack King since I was a child because their snacks help me stay energized. My favourite snacks are fruits and nuts, as they are both healthy and tasty.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but the last sentence is incomplete and unclear. Use linking words properly to connect ideas and complete your thoughts. Also, try to avoid run-on sentences and be more precise in your explanation.

Ví dụ: I only eat snacks twice a week, so I don't think it negatively affects my health. I focus on eating nutritious meals for breakfast, lunch, and dinner, which helps me maintain a balanced diet. Therefore, occasional snacking does not harm my overall health.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Avoid incorrect word forms like "obesity" used as a verb. Also, complete your sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present habits.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I ate too many snacks, which caused me to gain weight quickly. However, now I focus on a Balinese diet, so I limit the amount of snacks I eat.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors such as "snakes" instead of "snacks" and incomplete sentences. Avoid filler words and be specific about your favourite snacks. Use correct tense and sentence structure to make your answer natural and effective.

Ví dụ: When I was young, chips were my favourite snack because they were very tasty. Nowadays, I prefer healthier options like nuts and fruit.

× I have love Snack King since I was a child because it helps me stay energized throughout the day.

✓ I have loved Snack King since I was a child because it helps me stay energized throughout the day.

The verb 'have' should be followed by the past participle 'loved' to form the present perfect tense, indicating an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Using 'love' (base form) here is incorrect.

× My favorite snacks are food and nuts as they are both healthy and tasty.

✓ My favorite snacks are fruits and nuts as they are both healthy and tasty.

The word 'food' is too general and not a specific snack type. Likely, the intended word is 'fruits', which is a common snack and fits the context better.

× I usually focus on eating nutritious meals for breakfast, lunch and dinner which help me maintain a balance that therefore occasional snacking doesn't really.

✓ I usually focus on eating nutritious meals for breakfast, lunch and dinner, which help me maintain a balance; therefore, occasional snacking doesn't really affect me.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding punctuation and completing the thought improves sentence structure and meaning.

× When I was young I ate too much snacks that made me obesity in two months.

✓ When I was young I ate too many snacks that made me obese in two months.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'snacks'. Also, 'obesity' is a noun; the adjective 'obese' should be used to describe a person.

× But now I focused on Balinese diet so I'm limit the amount of.

✓ But now I focus on the Balinese diet, so I limit the amount I eat.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Focused' should be 'focus' to match the present time. Also, 'I'm limit' is incorrect; it should be 'I limit'. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

× When I was young, chips are the most popular snakes and it's it is so tasty and that is so ******* delicious.

✓ When I was young, chips were the most popular snacks and they were so tasty and delicious.

'Snakes' is a misspelling of 'snacks'. Also, 'chips are' should be 'chips were' to match past tense. The phrase 'it's it is' is redundant and incorrect; 'they were' is appropriate for plural 'chips'. The phrase 'so ******* delicious' is inappropriate and should be simplified to 'so tasty and delicious'.