Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сіздің жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөздерді дұрыс қолдану қажет. Мысалы, 'oftenly' орнына 'often' қолдану керек, 'barrel of chocolate' деген тіркес дұрыс емес. Жауабыңызды қысқа әрі нақты етіп, дұрыс сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Ví dụ: I often eat snacks like a chocolate bar at school after breakfast.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс қолдану және сөйлем құрылымын жақсарту қажет. Мысалы, 'depends of type' орнына 'depends on the type' дұрыс. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстырып, нақты мысалдар келтіріңіз.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the type of snack. For example, fruits like bananas or apples are healthy, but chocolate bars with a lot of fat are not.

Gợi ý: Сөйлем құрылымын және грамматиканы жақсарту керек. Мысалы, 'I uh, eaten' орнына 'I used to eat' дұрыс. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді толық және түсінікті етіп құрастырыңыз.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I used to eat snacks twice a day, including unhealthy ones like chocolate and other sweets.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызды нақты және табиғи етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, 'in nowadays' орнына 'nowadays' дұрыс. Сондай-ақ, 'for stock' деген тіркес дұрыс емес, оны алып тастаңыз немесе ауыстырыңыз.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I like to eat bananas and apples as snacks at school after breakfast because they are healthy for my body and brain.

× I oftenly eat snacks like barrel of chocolate in the school after breakfast.

✓ I often eat snacks like a bar of chocolate at school after breakfast.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. Also, 'barrel of chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'a bar of chocolate'. The preposition 'in the school' should be 'at school' when referring to being present at the school location.

× I oftenly eat snacks like barrel of chocolate in the school after breakfast.

✓ I often eat snacks like a bar of chocolate at school after breakfast.

The preposition 'in the school' is incorrect in this context; 'at school' is the correct phrase to indicate location where the activity happens.

× I think it depends of type, uh, this slag because there is a healthy type like vegetables or fruits such as banana or apple.

✓ I think it depends on the type, uh, this snack because there are healthy types like vegetables or fruits such as bananas or apples.

The phrase 'depends of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends on'. Also, 'slag' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'snack'. 'There is' should be 'there are' because 'types' is plural. 'Banana' and 'apple' should be plural to match 'fruits'.

× I think it depends of type, uh, this slag because there is a healthy type like vegetables or fruits such as banana or apple.

✓ I think it depends on the type, uh, this snack because there are healthy types like vegetables or fruits such as bananas or apples.

The subject 'types' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'banana' and 'apple' should be plural to agree with 'fruits'.

× It's actually healthy or bar of chocolate with straight fats.

✓ It's actually healthy, or a bar of chocolate with saturated fats.

The phrase 'bar of chocolate' needs an article 'a'. 'Straight fats' is incorrect; the correct term is 'saturated fats'.

× When I was young, I uh, eaten snacks like twice a day.

✓ When I was young, I ate snacks like twice a day.

The verb 'eaten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb; here simple past 'ate' is correct.

× So there's unhealthy snacks like chocolate or, uh, other sweets.

✓ So there are unhealthy snacks like chocolate or, uh, other sweets.

'Snacks' is plural, so 'there is' should be 'there are'.

× So I identified.

✓ So I avoided them.

The sentence 'So I identified.' is incomplete and unclear in context. Likely the intended meaning is 'So I avoided them.' or similar.

× Uh, in nowadays I like to eat bananas and apples for stock after breakfast in the school because it's healthy for my body and brain.

✓ Nowadays, I like to eat bananas and apples as snacks after breakfast at school because they're healthy for my body and brain.

'In nowadays' is incorrect; 'Nowadays' is used without 'in'. 'For stock' is incorrect; 'as snacks' is correct. 'In the school' should be 'at school'. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'bananas and apples'.