Part 1
Giám khảo
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Thí sinh
Actually, I don't often eat snack now. Whenever I feel sad or I'm in a bad mood, I will eat some snacks to feel better.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. I think snacks are unhealthy because they always have high sugar and fat. They are bad for our health.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Thí sinh
Actually, I didn't often eat snacks when I was a little girl. Uh, I think whenever I had, I got a great performance or, uh, got high scores on exams, my mom, uh, would buy snacks as a reward.
Giám khảo
What snacks do you like to eat?
Thí sinh
Well, I have a sweet tooth so I especially like the chocolate and sugars. This this weights and it helps me. It helps put me in a good mood.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和用词需更准确,避免重复和语法错误。例如,'snack'应为复数形式'snacks',并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't usually eat snacks, but when I'm feeling sad or upset, I sometimes have some to cheer myself up.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯,同时丰富词汇,避免重复使用'snacks'和'health'。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat, which can negatively affect our well-being.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多口头语'uh',应避免。句子结构可以更清晰,表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I didn't eat snacks very often as a child. However, when I performed well or got high exam scores, my mother would reward me with some snacks.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如'sugars'和'this this weights'。应使用正确的词汇和句子结构,表达更准确。
Ví dụ: I have a sweet tooth, so I especially enjoy chocolate and candies because they lift my mood.
× Actually, I don't often eat snack now.
✓ Actually, I don't often eat snacks now.
名词'snack'在这里表示零食,通常用复数形式'snacks',因为指的是零食的种类或数量。
× I think snacks are unhealthy because they always have high sugar and fat.
✓ I think snacks are unhealthy because they always have high sugar and fat content.
这里'sugar'和'fat'是不可数名词,前面加了'high',需要用不可数名词形式,建议加上'content'使表达更准确。
× Well, I have a sweet tooth so I especially like the chocolate and sugars.
✓ Well, I have a sweet tooth so I especially like chocolate and sugar.
'chocolate'和'sugar'在这里是不可数名词,不需要加冠词'the'和复数形式。
× This this weights and it helps me.
✓ This sweet snack helps me.
原句中'weights'用法错误,可能想表达'这东西'或'这点心',应使用正确的名词或短语。
× It helps put me in a good mood.
✓ It helps me to be in a good mood.
动词'help'后面接动词不定式时,通常用'to do'结构,且需要加上宾语'me'。