Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer when you eat snacks (e.g., time of day or situations). Use a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm on a diet' not 'I'll try my diet'), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon, around 4–5 pm. Because I'm now on a diet to lose weight, I try to choose light snacks like fruit or yogurt instead of fried items. Therefore I limit snacking to once a day to control calories.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion statement (Yes/No) and then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to organize your response. Avoid repeating phrases and unnecessary hesitations.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think most snack foods are healthy because many are high in sugar, salt, and unhealthy fats. For example, eating chips or fast food regularly can increase the risk of weight gain and poor energy levels, so I try to avoid them.

Gợi ý: Give a clear past-tense topic sentence saying whether you often ate snacks as a child. Then provide one or two specific details (what snacks, where, or why). Use linking words like 'often' and 'for example' and correct past tense verbs.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was younger. For example, I used to buy chips and sweets from the canteen after school almost every day because I liked the taste and it was convenient.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence listing your favorite snacks, then add a brief reason or preference and one specific example. Use vocabulary relevant to food and avoid repetition. Keep it short and structured.

Ví dụ: I like salty and sweet snacks, especially potato chips and chocolate. I also enjoy roasted chickpeas (chana) as a healthier alternative because they are filling and crunchy.

× Actually I'm recently I'll try my diet because uh, uh, my fat, I'm very too much fatty, umm, minimum for 58 KG. That's why I start my diet chart. So umm umm umm umm umm, I eat some.

✓ Actually, recently I'm trying a diet because I have too much body fat; I weigh about 58 kg. That's why I started a diet chart. So, I eat small snacks sometimes.

Errors: incorrect tense and verb forms ('I'm recently I'll try' should be 'recently I'm trying' or 'I've recently started trying'); incorrect adjective/adverb use ('very too much fatty' is ungrammatical); sentence fragments and awkward phrasing. Suggestions: use present continuous for ongoing actions (I'm trying), use 'have' to describe a condition (I have too much body fat), use 'weigh' for weight and past simple for completed action (I started a diet chart). Combine short fragments into clear sentences and avoid filler sounds.

× Umm, I think snacks items are not healthy for, uh, our body, uh, like a junk food, fast food and that's not good for health. I think it's very, I think, uh, avoid these types of dishes.

✓ I think snack items are not healthy for our bodies, like junk food and fast food; they are not good for your health. I think we should avoid these types of foods.

Errors: plural and adjective usage ('snacks items' should be 'snack items' or 'snacks'), article and noun choice ('a junk food' is incorrect; use 'junk food' without an article). Repetition and vague phrasing ('it's very, I think' and 'avoid these types of dishes') should be clarified. Suggestions: use 'our bodies' or 'your health', and 'foods' instead of 'dishes' when referring to junk/fast food. Use modal 'should' to give advice.

× Uh, when I was a younger in this time, I, uh, I attend my class, I went to another places some my schools also I going my private in this time. I eat lots of junk food, fast food and uh, many types of snacks.

✓ When I was younger, I used to attend classes and go to different places. I also attended private tuition at that time. I ate lots of junk food, fast food, and many types of snacks.

Errors: incorrect tense usage and verb forms ('when I was a younger' should be 'when I was younger'; present/past mix-ups: 'I attend', 'I going' should be past forms). Use 'used to' to indicate habitual past actions and past simple for completed actions ('I ate'). Suggestions: simplify sentences, use correct past tense forms (attended, went, ate) and avoid mixing present and past.

× Umm, most of the time I eat umm, a potato chips also, uh, have snacks items like uh uh, chips, chocolates and umm uh, chana chews. It's also my favorite snacks items.

✓ Most of the time I eat potato chips. I also have snacks like chips, chocolates, and chana chews. These are my favorite snack items.

Errors: article and countability problems ('a potato chips' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'favorite snacks items' word order and plurality). Suggestions: remove incorrect articles for plural nouns ('potato chips'), use consistent pluralization ('snack items'), and use 'these are' to refer back to plural items. Keep word order natural: 'favorite snack items'.