Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid medical labels like "eating disorder" unless accurate, and correct grammar (e.g., "when I come back from class"). Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the evening or after classes. For example, I often crave something light like potato chips or fries after I finish studying, especially late at night. Because of this, I try to keep healthier options like fruit nearby to avoid overeating.

Gợi ý: Finish your sentences and be specific. Give a direct opinion first, then explain reasons with linking words. Use precise phrases like "not very healthy" and describe how often and what you do to control it. Keep responses complete and within five sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't think snacking is very healthy for me because it increases my cravings and can lead to overeating. Therefore, I try not to snack often; instead, I eat regular meals. However, if I'm extremely hungry, I choose a small, healthier snack like yogurt or fruit to avoid bingeing.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use past tense consistently and add one specific example or memory. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often snacked when I was young because I played outside a lot and returned home very hungry. For example, my family and I would prepare simple snacks like fried bread or namkeen together, which made snack time fun. It was a special family moment and I enjoyed it very much.

Gợi ý: Answer with a direct statement listing specific snacks, then add one supporting detail about how or when you eat them. Avoid filler words like "umm" and correct small errors ("papad" instead of "papar"). Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I enjoy a variety of Indian snacks such as chips, namkeen and papad. I usually share these with my family—my brother and I often prepare and eat them together in the evenings, which makes snack time enjoyable.

× I mostly eat snacks when I'm craving for something lightweight such as potato chips or French fries.

✓ I mostly eat snacks when I'm craving something light such as potato chips or French fries.

Use of 'craving for' is nonstandard in this context; English uses 'crave' without 'for' when followed by a noun or noun phrase (craving something). Also 'lightweight' describes physical weight, while 'light' is the correct adjective for food that is not heavy. Suggestion: say 'craving something light' or 'craving a light snack'.

× When I come from classes or after midnight I usually crave them a lot because I have eating disorder and munching.

✓ When I come back from classes or after midnight I usually crave them a lot because I have an eating disorder and tend to munch.

Missing verb phrase 'come back from' is more natural than 'come from'. 'Eating disorder' requires an article here: 'an eating disorder'. The noun 'munching' needs a verb phrase; use 'tend to munch' to express habitual action. Also add necessary articles and small connecting words for clarity.

× I don't think it is healthy for me to eat snacks because it can make my cravings rise and I don't like that too.

✓ I don't think it is healthy for me to eat snacks because they can increase my cravings and I don't like that.

The subject 'snacks' is plural so use 'they' rather than 'it'. 'Make my cravings rise' is unnatural; use 'increase my cravings'. Remove unnecessary 'too' at the end. Ensure pronoun agreement and idiomatic verb choice.

× So I usually don't eat that often.

✓ So I usually don't eat them that often.

Reference to 'snacks' (plural) requires plural pronoun 'them' instead of 'that'. Maintain number agreement between noun and pronoun.

× But sometimes when I'm too hungry or I cannot stop myself then I.

✓ But sometimes when I'm too hungry or cannot stop myself, I give in.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Add 'give in' or 'eat them' to complete the idea. Also remove redundant 'I' before 'cannot'. Include a comma before the main clause for clarity.

× Yes, I used to crave for snacks a lot when I was young.

✓ Yes, I used to crave snacks a lot when I was young.

As before, 'crave' does not need 'for' in this construction. 'Used to' is correctly used for past habitual actions; keep tense but remove unnecessary preposition.

× For example, when I came back after my playing, I used to make snacks myself or with my family too.

✓ For example, when I came back from playing, I used to make snacks by myself or with my family.

Use 'come back from playing' rather than 'came back after my playing'. 'By myself' is more natural than 'myself' alone when emphasizing doing something alone. Reorder 'with my family' for natural flow and remove redundant 'too'.

× So it was a great time.

✓ So it was a great time.

This sentence is grammatically correct; it properly uses past tense 'was' to describe a past experience. No change needed.

× We enjoyed making snacks and enjoy them afterwards together and it was just a family time, so that's why I liked it.

✓ We enjoyed making snacks and eating them afterwards together; it was family time, so I liked it.

Mixing past and present tense ('enjoyed' then 'enjoy') is inconsistent. Use past tense 'eating' or 'ate' to match 'enjoyed'. 'Afterwards' should be followed by the verb 'eating' to clarify the action. Combine clauses for clarity and correct tense consistency.

× As we have great variety in snacks in India so I usually enjoy eating chips, namkeen, papar and mostly I enjoy that with my family and we make it together because me and my brother are such umm snack cravers.

✓ As we have a great variety of snacks in India, I usually enjoy eating chips, namkeen, and papad, and I mostly enjoy them with my family; we make them together because my brother and I are such snack cravers.

Add article 'a' before 'great variety' and use 'variety of' rather than 'variety in'. Use commas to separate items and correct spelling 'papad'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'snacks'. 'Me and my brother' should be 'my brother and I' for correct pronoun case and polite order. Replace filler 'umm' and ensure consistent plural forms.

× We enjoy that a lot.

✓ We enjoy them a lot.

'That' is singular; refer back to plural 'snacks' with 'them'. Maintain number agreement between pronoun and antecedent.