Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. For example, instead of 'I usually do my work in a patient way, not in a hurry way,' say 'I usually work patiently and don't rush.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. I usually take my time to complete tasks carefully without rushing. Also, when I talk to others, I speak softly and listen attentively to understand them clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to directly answer the question with a complete sentence and provide specific reasons or examples that make you feel impatient. For instance, mention situations or behaviors that trigger impatience.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when people are late or when I have to wait in long lines. For example, waiting for a delayed bus can make me feel frustrated.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear word choices like 'fluctuating' which is not appropriate here. Use more accurate vocabulary such as 'restless' or 'irritated.' Also, avoid incomplete sentences and organize your answer logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel restless and a bit irritated. For example, waiting a long time for a bus or slow service at a restaurant can make me feel impatient.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clearer sentence structures and avoid repetition. Also, complete your sentences fully. For example, say 'My job requires me to be very patient because I need to listen carefully to customers and help solve their problems.'

Ví dụ: Yes, my job as a retail assistant requires me to be very patient. I need to listen carefully to customers and help them find solutions to their problems.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences and incorrect word choices like 'fluctuated.' Try to use clearer vocabulary such as 'impatient' and complete your thoughts. Also, provide a direct comparison between your childhood and now.

Ví dụ: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child. My mother told me that I used to get upset easily, especially when my siblings didn't share toys. But nowadays, I try to stay calm and take my time with tasks.

× I usually do my work in a patient way, not in a hurry way.

✓ I usually do my work patiently, not in a hurried way.

The phrase 'in a patient way' is awkward; using the adverb 'patiently' is more natural. Similarly, 'in a hurry way' should be 'in a hurried way' to correctly use the adjective form.

× whenever I am talking with someone then I am always speak in a soft way, voice and clear them very carefully.

✓ whenever I am talking with someone, I always speak softly, with a clear voice, and listen to them very carefully.

The verb 'speak' should be in base form after 'I am always'. Also, 'in a soft way, voice' is incorrect; 'speak softly, with a clear voice' is correct. 'Clear them' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to them carefully' or 'hear them clearly'.

× Do you think that makes me feel impatient that whenever I.

✓ What do you think makes me feel impatient?

The original sentence is incomplete and structurally incorrect. The corrected sentence forms a proper question relevant to the examiner's question.

× Well, I feel very fluctuating whenever I do something for a long time.

✓ Well, I feel very restless whenever I do something for a long time.

The adjective 'fluctuating' is incorrectly used to describe a feeling. 'Restless' or 'impatient' would be appropriate to express discomfort during long tasks.

× For example at A at a morning time I had to wait for a bus for a long time then I feel very irritated.

✓ For example, in the morning, I had to wait for a bus for a long time, and then I felt very irritated.

The phrase 'at A at a morning time' is incorrect; 'in the morning' is correct. Also, 'feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match the past event.

× Apart from these at the restaurant whenever they took a lot of time then I then it makes me very fluctuated.

✓ Apart from this, at the restaurant, whenever they took a lot of time, it made me very restless.

'Apart from these' should be 'Apart from this' to refer to a singular idea. 'Then I then it makes me' is confusing; 'it made me' is correct. 'Fluctuated' is incorrectly used; 'restless' or 'impatient' fits better.

× So these are the.

✓ So these are the reasons.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'reasons' completes the thought.

× Definitely as I am working as a retail assistant in the apna store so this this job need a higher imp patient person because as I have to listen the customer carefully then I have to give a solution about their product.

✓ Definitely, as I am working as a retail assistant in the Apna store, this job needs a very patient person because I have to listen to the customers carefully and then provide solutions about their products.

'Need' should be 'needs' to agree with singular 'job'. 'Higher imp patient person' is incorrect; 'very patient person' is appropriate. 'Listen the customer' should be 'listen to the customers'. 'Give a solution about' should be 'provide solutions about'.

× So at that time I have to become a patient person rather than.

✓ So at that time, I have to be a patient person.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward; removing 'rather than' and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× Well, I don't have enough knowledge about my childhood period but my mother told me that when I was a child then I was I was very fluctuated when my siblings did not give me a toy.

✓ Well, I don't have enough knowledge about my childhood, but my mother told me that when I was a child, I was very upset when my siblings did not give me a toy.

'Fluctuated' is incorrectly used; 'upset' or 'frustrated' is appropriate. The sentence is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× Apart from this, nowaday I'm very patient. Full person eyes usually do work without rushing it because it helps to.

✓ Apart from this, nowadays I'm a very patient person. I usually do my work without rushing because it helps me.

'Nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'Full person eyes' is incorrect; 'a very patient person' is correct. 'Do work without rushing it' is better as 'do my work without rushing'. The sentence is completed for clarity.