Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
I think I am not actually a patient person because although I will try a lot many times for doing a task, but I will give up when I try a long time.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
I would say it's the unsuccessful experience makes I feel impatient. For example if I do a task for many times but I don't got success, I will feel very impatient.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
If I do something for a long time, I will feel very confused and tired. If after a long time I get successful, I will feel happy but I get failure I will feel.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
My job require I to be patient. It is a main factor of my job. I need to read a lot of books and make some comment on this. Also I need to correct the word I make.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I strongly believe that I am patient. I am more patient now because when I was a child I will not. I didn't do a task for a long time and very easy to give up, but now I will do a taxi for a long time. And just do and never give up.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且直接回答问题。
Ví dụ: I am not very patient because I tend to give up if I try something for a long time without success.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致,同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Unsuccessful experiences make me feel impatient. For example, if I try a task many times but don't succeed, I get frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议补充完整句子,使用连接词,并且明确表达感受。
Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired and confused. However, if I succeed in the end, I feel very happy.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够自然,建议使用正确的句型和词汇,避免重复。
Ví dụ: My job requires me to be patient because I have to read many books and write comments. I also need to correct my mistakes carefully.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子,使用正确时态,并且避免拼写错误。
Ví dụ: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I would give up easily, but now I keep trying and never give up.