Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not a patient person at all. No matter. For people or for things. I'm not patient anymore.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
For example, if if one person are late, I will get frustrated. I think this is because I like to be efficient and don't enjoy wasting time.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
The outcome will vary depending on circumstance. For example, if I was I am doing my favorite things I think is enjoyable, but if if I was doing one size I don't like it, I will get a sense of impatience.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yes, but I am a student when you know when you deal with your schoolwork, maybe a math problem is need your patient to solve it. So I think this is my. Are you sure?
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's my school life help me because when you work on difficult math problems, I need to stay calm and think carefully to find the right solution. This helps me improve my problem saving skills and achieve better results. I think patients help me help me a lot in my school life.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,句子结构不完整,表达重复且不自然。建议使用完整句子,避免重复,并且表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person, whether it's with people or things. I often find myself getting frustrated quickly.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够准确。建议注意主谓一致,使用连接词使句子更流畅,并且提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: For example, when someone is late, I feel frustrated because I value efficiency and dislike wasting time.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱,语法错误多,句子不完整。建议理清思路,使用正确时态和句型,避免重复,表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I am doing something I enjoy, I feel happy, but if it's something I dislike, I become impatient.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊,语法错误严重,表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题,使用完整句子,并且避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, as a student, I need to be patient when solving difficult math problems because they require careful thinking.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达有重复,语法和用词错误较多。建议简化句子,避免重复,注意单复数和词形变化,表达更准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now because school has taught me to stay calm and think carefully when solving difficult math problems, which improves my problem-solving skills.
× if if one person are late, I will get frustrated.
✓ if one person is late, I will get frustrated.
这里的主语是单数one person,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式is,而不是are。
× I think is enjoyable,
✓ I think it is enjoyable,
句子缺少主语it,导致句子结构不完整。应补充it作为形式主语。
× if if I was doing one size I don't like it, I will get a sense of impatience.
✓ if I am doing something I don't like, I will get a sense of impatience.
条件句中描述现在或将来情况,应使用一般现在时am而非过去时was;one size用词不当,应改为something。
× maybe a math problem is need your patient to solve it.
✓ maybe a math problem needs your patience to solve it.
math problem是单数,谓语动词应为needs;patient是形容词,名词形式应为patience。
× So I think this is my. Are you sure?
✓ So I think this is mine. Are you sure?
句子不完整,this is my后应接名词或代词,改为mine表示“这是我的”。
× I think patients help me help me a lot in my school life.
✓ I think patience helps me a lot in my school life.
patients是病人,错误使用,应为patience(耐心);help是第三人称单数,需加s。