Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and structured by directly answering the question first, then providing clear reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity.

Ví dụ: I am not a very patient person because I often find myself wanting others to hurry up when they are talking. This is because I am eager to hear the conclusion of their stories, and waiting makes me feel quite stressed.

Gợi ý: Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague expressions.

Ví dụ: I think what makes me feel impatient is when my parents try to teach me something. Sometimes, their way of explaining things makes me feel rushed and eager to finish quickly.

Gợi ý: Improve coherence by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Provide specific examples to support your feelings.

Ví dụ: I feel quite pressured when I have to focus on one task for a long time because my concentration span is very short. For example, I can only focus for about five seconds before I start feeling stressed.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clarify your ideas with better vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid ambiguity and explain your preferences clearly.

Ví dụ: Since I am still a high school student, I don't have a job yet. However, I would prefer a job that doesn't require much patience because I enjoy interacting with people and experiencing many things quickly.

Gợi ý: Structure your answer with a clear comparison and use linking words to connect ideas. Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar for clarity.

Ví dụ: I think I have become less patient as I have grown older. When I was a child, I had to tolerate many things because I have two younger sisters, so I often compromised. However, now I feel more comfortable expressing my feelings, which makes me less patient.

× I sometimes think to others while they are talking like hurry up because I can't wait to listen to the result of the stories and waiting makes me very stressful.

✓ I sometimes think about others while they are talking, like 'hurry up,' because I can't wait to listen to the end of the stories, and waiting makes me very stressed.

The phrase 'think to others' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'think about others' (Problem type 11). Also, 'waiting makes me very stressful' is incorrect because 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, not the feeling itself. The correct adjective is 'stressed.' Additionally, 'result of the stories' is better expressed as 'end of the stories.' These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I haven't think about what makes me so impatient, but I think I'm afraid to say that my parents want to teach something to me made me impatient.

✓ I haven't thought about what makes me so impatient, but I think I'm afraid to say that my parents wanting to teach me something made me impatient.

The verb 'think' after 'haven't' should be in the past participle form 'thought' (Problem type 9). Also, the phrase 'my parents want to teach something to me made me impatient' is awkward; it should be 'my parents wanting to teach me something made me impatient' to correctly link the ideas and maintain tense consistency.

× I feel pressure when I need to concentrate on one thing for a long time because I don't have any concentration so I can focus on one thing for only a 5 second or like that.

✓ I feel pressure when I need to concentrate on one thing for a long time because I don't have any concentration, so I can focus on one thing for only 5 seconds or so.

The phrase 'a 5 second' is incorrect because 'second' should be plural when preceded by a number greater than one (Problem type 1). Also, 'like that' is better expressed as 'or so' for naturalness. These changes correct number agreement and improve fluency.

× I want to be in a line which doesn't require any patient because I want to talk with people or interrupt and experience a lot of things in a short span.

✓ I want to be in a line which doesn't require any patience because I want to talk with people, interrupt, and experience a lot of things in a short span.

The word 'patient' is an adjective; the correct noun form here is 'patience' (Problem type 14). This correction ensures the correct use of quantifiers and noun forms.

× I used to stand many things because I have a little 2 little sisters so I just need to compromise everything but now I can express my feeling freely so I feel I am impatient.

✓ I used to stand many things because I have two little sisters, so I just needed to compromise on everything, but now I can express my feelings freely, so I feel I am impatient.

The phrase 'a little 2 little sisters' is incorrect; it should be 'two little sisters' (Problem type 1). Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' when referring to emotions generally. Additionally, tense consistency is improved by changing 'have' to 'had' or adjusting the sentence accordingly. These corrections address number agreement and noun usage.