Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为简单，建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并注意语法时态和词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I am not a very patient person. I tend to get frustrated quickly, especially when I encounter difficulties in my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I am interested in something, I am willing to solve problems and learn, so I don't feel impatient.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议使用简单明了的句子表达感受，并注意词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: I usually feel frustrated because I think it wastes my time and energy. I prefer to spend my time on something useful.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意人称代词的使用，句子结构应更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, patience is very important for me as a college student. It helps me concentrate on my studies and complete my work better than before.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议分句表达，注意时态和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I didn't have much pressure, so I was more patient when facing difficulties. But now, as a college student, I have a lot of pressure from studying many subjects, which makes me less patient.

× I really get angry more quick than others.

✓ I really get angry more quickly than others.

这里使用了比较级副词，应该用副词形式quickly而不是形容词quick。

× I willing to solve them and learn them that may not let me feel impatient.

✓ I am willing to solve them and learn them, which may not let me feel impatient.

缺少助动词am，导致句子结构不完整，应该使用am willing表示愿意。

× I willing to spend normal time on something that can provide some useful.

✓ I am willing to spend normal time on something that can provide some usefulness.

同样缺少助动词am，且some useful用法不当，应该用名词usefulness。

× I shall spend your time on my study.

✓ I shall spend my time on my study.

代词使用错误，your应改为my以保持主语一致。

× I can finish my work more better than before.

✓ I can finish my work better than before.

more better是双重比较级，比较级better本身已包含比较意义，不需要more。

× Now when I was child I didn't have too much pressure, so I've already been patient when I face difficulties.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have too much pressure, so I was already patient when I faced difficulties.

缺少冠词a，时态不一致，face应改为过去式faced。

× But at now I am a college student and I should learn a lot of subjects.

✓ But now I am a college student and I should learn a lot of subjects.

短语at now用法错误，正确表达为now。

× So it's bring a lot of pressure to me and I really get.

✓ So it brings a lot of pressure to me and I really feel it.

动词形式错误，should用第三人称单数形式brings，句子不完整，缺少谓语feel it。