PatiencePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you a patient person?

Thí sinh

You know, I'm not a patient person. My friends and my families call me impatient, man, because I can always be angry. Yeah.

Giám khảo

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Thí sinh

And when the task is so hard that I can to do it well, I'll be impatient. Such as hard homework or some hard target, yeah.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Thí sinh

And I will feel frightful because it's hard for me to focus on one thing long time. Yeah, I can't do this or it's hard for me to do this.

Giám khảo

Does your job require you to be patient?

Thí sinh

Yes, my job requires me to be patient. So now I'm trying to be more patient. I need to be a more patient people to accomplish my job.

Giám khảo

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'm more patient than before and when I was a middle school student I will always be impatient, but now I can do something more patient than before.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are you a patient person?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免口语化和重复表达,且句子结构应更完整自然。可以直接回答问题并简洁说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I am not a patient person because I tend to get frustrated easily when things don't go as planned.

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。应使用正确的时态和句式,并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I face difficult tasks, like challenging homework or tough goals that are hard to achieve.

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,词汇使用不当(如“frightful”),且句子结构混乱。应使用更合适的词汇并简洁表达感受。

Ví dụ: I feel bored and distracted when I have to do something for a long time because it's difficult for me to maintain focus.

Does your job require you to be patient?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本符合要求,但语法和用词有误,如“a more patient people”。应注意单复数和表达准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires patience, so I am trying to become more patient to complete my tasks effectively.

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 时态使用错误,句子结构不清晰。应使用正确时态并简洁表达对比。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was in middle school because I have learned to control my emotions better.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× My friends and my families call me impatient, man, because I can always be angry.

My friends and my family call me impatient, man, because I can always be angry.

“families” 应该用单数形式“family”,因为这里指的是“我的家人”,是不可数名词的集合概念。

Verb + -ing form

× And when the task is so hard that I can to do it well, I'll be impatient.

And when the task is so hard that I can't do it well, I'll be impatient.

“can to do”是不正确的表达,情态动词“can”后面直接接动词原形,不能加“to”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I will feel frightful because it's hard for me to focus on one thing long time.

And I will feel frightful because it's hard for me to focus on one thing for a long time.

“long time”前面需要加介词“for”表示持续时间,且“a long time”是固定搭配。

Singular and plural issue

× I need to be a more patient people to accomplish my job.

I need to be a more patient person to accomplish my job.

“people”是复数,前面有不定冠词“a”,应使用单数“person”。

Future tense issue

× when I was a middle school student I will always be impatient,

when I was a middle school student I was always impatient,

描述过去的习惯动作应使用过去时态,不能用将来时“will”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× but now I can do something more patient than before.

but now I can be more patient than before.

“do something more patient”表达不当,应使用“be more patient”表示变得更有耐心。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AngryIrate; Heated; Lose one's temper
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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