Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: I am not very patient when it comes to work because I like to finish tasks on time. However, when I have to wait in public places, I remain calm and composed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, try to be more specific about why missing deadlines makes you impatient.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I cannot meet deadlines for my internship or college assignments because it affects my performance and causes stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence.

Ví dụ: I find it stressful to focus on one task for a long time because my mind tends to wander. Therefore, although I try to stay consistent, it is often difficult for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to explain your point with specific examples.

Ví dụ: No, my college work and internship do not require much patience because I have to complete tasks quickly. For example, in my marketing internship, meeting deadlines promptly is very important.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasoning more clearly.

Ví dụ: I am less patient now than when I was a child because I tend to rush to achieve my goals quickly. This mindset makes me want to get things done as soon as possible.

× my mind get diverted easily to different things that I should have been focusing on

✓ my mind gets diverted easily to different things that I should have been focusing on

The subject 'mind' is singular, so the verb should be 'gets' instead of 'get' to agree in number. In English, singular subjects take verbs with an 's' in the present tense.

× which so that I need to meet deadline as soon as possible

✓ so I need to meet deadlines as soon as possible

The phrase 'which so that' is incorrect and redundant. Using 'so' alone correctly connects the cause and effect. Also, 'deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× Neither my college work or my internship requires me to be patient with the job

✓ Neither my college work nor my internship requires me to be patient with the job

'Neither' should be paired with 'nor' instead of 'or' to correctly connect two negative alternatives. This is a standard rule in English conjunction usage.

× I am not patient anymore as much as I was when I was a child

✓ I am not as patient anymore as I was when I was a child

The correct comparative structure is 'not as... as' to compare two states. The original sentence misplaces 'as much as' which is incorrect in this context.

× So I'm not patient about achieving anything in my life I needed ASAP

✓ So I'm not patient about achieving anything in my life that I need ASAP

The sentence lacks the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to maintain present tense consistency.