Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Yes, I consider myself as a patient person. For example, I am working on in a Chrome school and there are many children's this. Sometimes they are very noisy, but I can teach them without anger.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Honestly, there are many things that makes me feel impatient. For example. If if my brother is playing game what I'm studying, I I feel stressed and.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
Oh well. I can concentrate on something for a long time. It's not very hard for me. People around me always say that I that I have good concentration and I also think so.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I work at the Chrome school. Uh, so my job is to treat with those children and teach them patiently about subjects. So it requires a strong patience.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Oh well. Personally I think so. For example, when I was a child I I'm I'm very easy to get angry and always quarrel with friends. But now I don't.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Answer wa shizen de, shōsai o fukumeru koto wa yoi desu ga, bunpō no shōsai to eigo no seikaku-sa o kōjō suru hitsuyō ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I work at a Chrome school where many children are noisy, but I can teach them patiently without getting angry.' to iu fū ni, yoku tsunagatta bunshō o tsukutte kudasai.
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, I work at a Chrome school where many children can be noisy, but I always teach them patiently without getting angry.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa jūbun ni shōsai de wa arimasen. Bunpō no machigai mo arimasu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui bunshō o tsukutte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I feel impatient when my brother plays games while I am trying to study because it distracts me.' to iu fū ni setsumei shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: Honestly, I feel impatient when my brother plays games while I am studying because it distracts me and makes me stressed.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa yoku tsunagatte imasu ga, motto shizen de, fukusū no setsumei o tsukatte, rikai o fukameru koto ga dekimasu. Tatoeba, 'I can concentrate on tasks for a long time without difficulty because I enjoy focusing on my work.' to iu fū ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I can concentrate on tasks for a long time without difficulty because I enjoy focusing on my work. People around me often say I have good concentration, and I agree with them.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa rikai shiyasui desu ga, eigo no seikaku-sa to bunpō o kōjō suru koto ga dekimasu. Tatoeba, 'My job at the Chrome school requires me to be very patient because I teach children who need extra attention.' to iu fū ni setsumei shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: My job at the Chrome school requires me to be very patient because I teach children who need extra attention and care.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa yoku tsunagatte imasu ga, eigo no seikaku-sa o kōjō suru tame ni, motto shizen na hyōgen o tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get angry easily and quarrel with friends, but now I remain calm.' to iu fū ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get angry easily and quarrel with friends, but now I remain calm and handle situations better.
× I am working on in a Chrome school and there are many children's this.
✓ I am working in a Chrome school and there are many children there.
The phrase 'working on in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'working in' when referring to a place. Also, 'children's this' is incorrect; it should be 'children there' to indicate their presence. Using correct prepositions clarifies the meaning.
× there are many children's this.
✓ there are many children there.
The word 'children's' is a possessive form and incorrect here; the plural noun 'children' should be used without an apostrophe to indicate multiple kids.
× there are many things that makes me feel impatient.
✓ there are many things that make me feel impatient.
The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.
× If if my brother is playing game what I'm studying, I I feel stressed and.
✓ If my brother is playing a game while I'm studying, I feel stressed.
The sentence has repeated words ('If if', 'I I') and lacks clarity. 'Playing game what I'm studying' is incorrect; it should be 'playing a game while I'm studying'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.
× I work at the Chrome school. Uh, so my job is to treat with those children and teach them patiently about subjects.
✓ I work at the Chrome school. So my job is to deal with those children and teach them patiently about subjects.
The phrase 'treat with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'deal with' when referring to managing or handling people. Using correct prepositions improves clarity.
× So it requires a strong patience.
✓ So it requires strong patience.
'Patience' is an uncountable noun and does not take the adjective 'strong' with an article 'a'. The correct form is 'strong patience' without 'a'.
× I I'm very easy to get angry and always quarrel with friends.
✓ I was very easy to get angry and always quarreled with friends.
The sentence refers to past behavior ('when I was a child'), so past tense should be used: 'was' instead of 'am', and 'quarrel' should be in past tense 'quarreled'.