Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response first, then explain with simple and correct sentences. Avoid repeating contradictory statements. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I am sometimes patient, but it depends on my mood. When I feel stressed, I become impatient and prefer to be alone. However, usually, I try to stay calm and patient in most situations.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but the sentence structure is unclear. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when' to explain reasons clearly. Also, try to avoid vague phrases and be more specific about your feelings and situations.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I am stressed or under pressure at work because it makes me anxious. For example, I find it difficult to go out alone when I am in such a mood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to understand the question fully and respond with a clear opinion. Use simple sentences and give specific examples related to feelings or experiences when doing something for a long time.

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired and bored. However, using my mobile phone or laptop helps me stay focused and makes the time pass more quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and explain your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: My job does not require much patience because I work in front of a laptop all day. Sometimes it is stressful, but I do not need to be very patient for my tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Link your sentences logically to make your answer clearer.

Ví dụ: I was more patient as a child because life was simpler. Now, working long hours from 11 to 8 in front of a laptop is stressful and makes me less patient.

× Well, it depends on my mood, because sometimes I feel like really stressful.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood, because sometimes I feel really stressed.

The word 'stressful' is an adjective describing something that causes stress, but here the student wants to express their own feeling, so the correct adjective is 'stressed'. Using 'really stressed' correctly describes the person's emotional state.

× So that time nobody can talk to me or anything because that time I feel impatient to me.

✓ So at that time, nobody can talk to me or anything because I feel impatient.

The phrase 'impatient to me' is incorrect. 'Impatient' is an adjective describing a person's feeling and does not require a pronoun after it. Also, 'that time' should be 'at that time' for correct preposition usage.

× But yeah, I'm really cool, a person and a very impatient person.

✓ But yeah, I'm a really cool person and a very impatient person.

The article 'a' should come before 'really cool person' as a whole noun phrase. The original sentence incorrectly separates 'really cool' and 'a person'. Correct word order is 'a really cool person'.

× When I'm getting stressed from work or I'm under pressure at that time, it makes me feel impatient for anyone, like I fail to go alone somewhere for this situation.

✓ When I'm stressed from work or under pressure, it makes me feel impatient with anyone; I fail to go somewhere alone in this situation.

The preposition 'from' after 'stressed' is incorrect; 'stressed from work' should be 'stressed by work' or simply 'stressed from work' is acceptable but 'stressed by work' is better. Also, 'impatient for anyone' should be 'impatient with anyone'. The phrase 'fail to go alone somewhere for this situation' is awkward; 'go somewhere alone in this situation' is clearer.

× Well, I really don't think our sense about the question, but the answer in my perspective is if I have something like my mobile phone or my laptop for a long time, it really helps me from my work or my duty.

✓ Well, I really don't understand the sense of the question, but from my perspective, if I have something like my mobile phone or my laptop for a long time, it really helps me with my work or my duties.

The phrase 'I really don't think our sense about the question' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'I really don't understand the sense of the question'. Also, 'helps me from my work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'helps me with my work'.

× Not really because full days I I'll be there in front of my laptop and you can judge my feelings because on the laptop screen in front of my eyes.

✓ Not really, because all day I am in front of my laptop, and you can judge my feelings by looking at the laptop screen in front of my eyes.

The phrase 'full days I I'll be there' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'all day I am'. Also, 'because on the laptop screen in front of my eyes' is incomplete; it needs a verb like 'by looking at' to make sense.

× So it's really stressful sometimes it's really struck.

✓ So it's really stressful sometimes; it really affects me.

The word 'struck' is incorrectly used here. 'Struck' is the past tense of 'strike' and does not fit the context. The student likely meant 'it really affects me' or 'it really hits me emotionally'.

× I think in my childhood I were more patient than now because when I'm getting into the practical life, like I'm working 11 to 8 in front of my laptop and it's really getting stressful, sometimes challenging work, it feels really stressful, so.

✓ I think in my childhood I was more patient than now because when I got into practical life, like working from 11 to 8 in front of my laptop, it's really stressful and sometimes challenging work; it feels really stressful.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. Also, tense consistency is important: 'when I'm getting into' should be 'when I got into' to match past reference. The phrase '11 to 8' should be 'from 11 to 8' for clarity.