Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'face up too many challenge' và 'need to patient'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên và đúng ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have faced many challenges in life. Sometimes, when tasks are difficult, I try to stay calm and persistent.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'concentrate'. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'concentrate to do some things' thành 'concentrate on doing something'.

Ví dụ: Distractions and noise make me feel impatient because when I try to concentrate on a task, any noise breaks my focus, which frustrates me and makes me reluctant to continue.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'quite' và 'boring'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy dùng các từ thay thế và liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Since I am patient, I usually feel comfortable and satisfied when working on a task for a long time. However, sometimes I do get tired and bored.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần tránh sử dụng tiếng lắp bắp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'required' thành 'requires' và 'don't patient' thành 'aren't patient'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh dùng từ không chính xác.

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. If you are not patient, it can affect your performance and even risk your job security.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'haven't completed' thành 'hadn't developed' và 'have completed' thành 'has developed'. Câu trả lời nên đầy đủ và mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because my personality and abilities have developed as I grew up.

× I have face up too many challenge and I sometimes feel hard to do something so I need to patient.

✓ I have faced up to too many challenges and I sometimes find it hard to do something so I need to be patient.

The word 'challenge' should be plural 'challenges' because it refers to multiple difficulties. Also, 'face up' should be 'faced up to' to be grammatically correct. 'Need to patient' should be 'need to be patient' because 'patient' is an adjective and requires the verb 'be' after 'need to'.

× I have face up too many challenge and I sometimes feel hard to do something so I need to patient.

✓ I have faced up to too many challenges and I sometimes find it hard to do something so I need to be patient.

The verb 'face' in present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'faced'. Also, 'feel hard to do something' is incorrect; it should be 'find it hard to do something'.

× I have face up too many challenge and I sometimes feel hard to do something so I need to patient.

✓ I have faced up to too many challenges and I sometimes find it hard to do something so I need to be patient.

The phrase 'face up' should be followed by the preposition 'to' to form 'face up to', meaning to confront or deal with something.

× I need to patient.

✓ I need to be patient.

'Patient' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be' after 'need to' to form the correct expression 'need to be patient'.

× when I concentrate to do some things and someone makes noise that I can't concentrate

✓ when I concentrate on doing some things and someone makes noise so that I can't concentrate

The verb 'concentrate' is followed by the preposition 'on' and the gerund form of the verb, so it should be 'concentrate on doing'. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'so that' to indicate cause and effect.

× when I concentrate to do some things and someone makes noise that I can't concentrate

✓ when I concentrate on doing some things and someone makes noise so that I can't concentrate

After 'concentrate', the verb should be in the '-ing' form preceded by 'on', i.e., 'concentrate on doing'.

× Because I am quite patient, so when doing something for a long time I feel very comfortable and very happy that I can make something for a long time.

✓ Because I am quite patient, when doing something for a long time I feel very comfortable and very happy that I can do something for a long time.

Using both 'Because' and 'so' together is redundant. One should be removed. Also, 'make something' is incorrect here; 'do something' is appropriate.

× But sometimes I am quite tired and quite boring.

✓ But sometimes I am quite tired and quite bored.

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes a feeling. The student is describing their own feeling, so 'bored' is correct.

× Uh, yes, of course my job required me to be patient.

✓ Uh, yes, of course my job requires me to be patient.

The present tense 'requires' is appropriate here because the job currently demands patience.

× if you, if, if you don't patient in this job, yeah, your salary will be decreased and you will lose your job immediate immediately.

✓ if you are not patient in this job, your salary will be decreased and you will lose your job immediately.

'Don't patient' is incorrect; it should be 'are not patient' because 'patient' is an adjective. Also, 'immediate immediately' is redundant; only 'immediately' is needed.

× you will lose your job immediate immediately.

✓ you will lose your job immediately.

The adverb 'immediately' should be placed correctly without repetition or the word 'immediate' before it.

× Uh, for me, I am more patient than when I was a child.

✓ Uh, for me, I am more patient than when I was a child.

This sentence is correct; no singular/plural issue here.

× That is because when I was child, my ability and my personality haven't completed yet.

✓ That is because when I was a child, my ability and my personality hadn't developed yet.

The article 'a' is needed before 'child'. Also, 'haven't completed' is incorrect; 'hadn't developed' is more appropriate to express incomplete development in the past.

× That is because when I was child, my ability and my personality haven't completed yet.

✓ That is because when I was a child, my ability and my personality hadn't developed yet.

The past perfect tense 'hadn't developed' is appropriate to indicate that the development was not complete at that past time.

× And when and when I grow, I, when I grew up, my personality, uh, have completed so I can.

✓ And when I grew up, my personality had developed, so I could.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. It should be simplified and corrected for tense agreement: 'grew up' (past), 'had developed' (past perfect), and 'could' (past ability).