Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够流畅自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复和口语填充词，简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when there is no rush. However, if something is very urgent, I tend to become a bit anxious and less patient.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和表达不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，表达更完整清晰。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have urgent and important tasks with strict deadlines. In such cases, I often get nervous and find it hard to stay calm.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但语法和用词有误。建议注意单复数一致，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: It depends on the task. If it is important to me, I can focus and work on it for a long time. However, if it is less important, I find it hard to stay patient and concentrate.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免口语填充词，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. As a salesperson for a tech company, I often explain cloud services to customers who are not familiar with them, so I need to be patient and clear.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达对比观点。

Ví dụ: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I can better distinguish what is important. As a child, I found it difficult to do so, which made me less patient.

× Yes, I think I'm quite patient person uh, especially when things is not in a rush, I can be patient but when sometimes The thing is very urgent for me, I can't keep my self in calm down and I become so pushy.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite a patient person, uh, especially when things are not in a rush, I can be patient but sometimes the thing is very urgent for me, I can't keep myself calm down and I become so pushy.

这里“patient person”前缺少冠词“a”，属于单复数问题；“things is”应为“things are”，因为things是复数；“The thing”首字母不应大写；“my self”应写作“myself”。这些都是单复数和冠词使用错误。

× When things is really urgent and very important for me and I have a time guideline, I might get some nervous and I can I can't calm down and I maybe become impatient like if I must meet.

✓ When things are really urgent and very important for me and I have a time guideline, I might get a bit nervous and I can't calm down and I may become impatient, like if I must meet.

“things is”应为“things are”，因为things是复数；“some nervous”应为“a bit nervous”，nervous是形容词，不能用some修饰。

× It depends on the thing. If the things are really important for me, I can do it for a long time and just go for it. But if the things is less important, I won't stay come down and do it for a long time.

✓ It depends on the thing. If the things are really important for me, I can do it for a long time and just go for it. But if the things are less important, I won't stay calm and do it for a long time.

“things is”应为“things are”，因为things是复数；“stay come down”应为“stay calm”，这里用词错误。

× I'm a salesperson for a tech company and a cloud service may be unfamiliar for some people.

✓ I'm a salesperson at a tech company and cloud services may be unfamiliar to some people.

“salesperson for a tech company”应为“salesperson at a tech company”，表示在某公司工作；“unfamiliar for”应为“unfamiliar to”，固定搭配。

× So if they're umm my customer, they don't familiar with our service.

✓ So if they're, umm, my customers, they aren't familiar with our service.

“they don't familiar”应为“they aren't familiar”，因为familiar是形容词，需用be动词；“customer”应为复数“customers”，与they对应。

× I can say that as I grow up, I can identify the things are important or less important, so I can use my patient to done the things well.

✓ I can say that as I grow up, I can identify which things are important or less important, so I can use my patience to do the things well.

“patient”应为名词“patience”；“done”应为动词原形“do”；“the things”前应加“which”引导定语从句，使句子更通顺。

× But when I was a kid, it's hardly to identify these things, so I made less.

✓ But when I was a kid, it was hard to identify these things, so I did less.

“it's hardly to identify”应为“it was hard to identify”，时态应与“was a kid”一致，且“hardly”用法错误，应为“hard”；“made less”应为“did less”，动词用法错误。