Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了耐心的概念，但语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“I think myself as”应为“I consider myself a patient person”。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: I consider myself a patient person because I like to learn things step by step. When I face difficulties, I usually search for information to find solutions and overcome obstacles.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“it's hard for me to make impatient”应为“it's hard for me to feel impatient”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when things are out of my control because I want to solve problems quickly. However, generally, I am quite patient.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达有误，如“car manufactured”应为“car manufacturing”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意时态和名词形式，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I feel bored when I have to do repetitive tasks for a long time. For example, I once worked part-time in a car manufacturing factory, standing in front of a machine for seven hours, which made me feel frustrated.

Gợi ý: 回答不够简洁且有语法错误，如“makes me to umm search”应为“makes me search”。建议避免口语填充词，简化表达，并直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: Although I am a student, my studies require patience. I often need to research a lot of information and prepare papers to support my presentations.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了对比，但存在语法错误和口语填充词，如“if I don't achieve”应为“if I didn't achieve”，建议使用更正式的表达，避免口语词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to cry if I didn't achieve my goals or if my parents didn't buy something for me. Now, I believe that being naughty is not the solution; instead, I try to persuade others in the right way.

× I think myself as a patient person, I like to learn things step by step and if I encounter some difficulties, I'll find the answer and search some informations to overcome the obstacles.

✓ I think of myself as a patient person. I like to learn things step by step, and if I encounter some difficulties, I'll find the answer and search for some information to overcome the obstacles.

“think myself as”用法错误，正确表达是“think of myself as”。“search some informations”中“informations”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式，应为“information”，且“search”后应加介词“for”。

× Well, if something that's out of control, maybe it makes me feel annoyed and I want to overcome this difficulty quickly, but overall I think it's hard for me to make impatient.

✓ Well, if something is out of control, maybe it makes me feel annoyed and I want to overcome this difficulty quickly, but overall I think it's hard for me to be impatient.

“if something that's out of control”缺少谓语动词，应为“if something is out of control”。“make impatient”用法错误，正确表达是“be impatient”。

× I feel bored when I do something again and again. For example once I had a part time job in a factory about car manufactured and I stand in front of the machine 7 hours. That's makes me feel frustrated.

✓ I feel bored when I do something again and again. For example, once I had a part-time job in a factory about car manufacturing and I stood in front of the machine for 7 hours. That makes me feel frustrated.

“car manufactured”应为“car manufacturing”表示制造业。动词时态应与过去时间一致，“stand”应改为过去式“stood”。“That's makes”中“makes”多余，应为“That makes”。

× Actually I am a student now. Still I think I need to be patient as a student as well because every time we need to do a lot of projects and this makes me to umm search for a lot of information and paper to support my presentation. So I think.

✓ Actually, I am a student now. Still, I think I need to be patient as a student as well because every time we need to do a lot of projects and this makes me search for a lot of information and papers to support my presentation. So I think.

“makes me to umm search”中“to”不应出现，正确结构是“makes me search”。“paper”应为复数“papers”，表示多份资料。

× Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I used to cry if I don't achieve my goal, if my parents don't buy something for me. But from now, I think, uh, naughty is not the solution. You have to find the right way to persuade others.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was a kid I used to cry if I didn't achieve my goal, if my parents didn't buy something for me. But from now on, I think, uh, being naughty is not the solution. You have to find the right way to persuade others.

条件句中时态应一致，过去时态“didn't”替代“don't”。“from now”应为“from now on”表示从现在开始。形容词“naughty”应改为动名词“being naughty”作为主语。