Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、より具体的な例を加えると説得力が増します。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because even when I face difficulties, I calmly look for solutions and never give up. For example, when I struggled with a difficult subject at school, I kept studying regularly until I improved.

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的ですが、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然な流れにしましょう。また、具体的な状況を詳しく説明すると良いです。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I'm waiting for exciting news, such as the results of important tests, because the uncertainty makes me anxious. Also, I get impatient when someone walks slowly in front of me, especially if I'm in a hurry.

Gợi ý: 内容が少し不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。より明確で具体的な表現を使い、接続詞で文をつなげましょう。

Ví dụ: I feel excited when I have to work on a task for a long time because it allows me to plan my future career carefully and improve my skills. Moreover, I can seek support from others to complete the task successfully.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りがあり、内容が少し曖昧です。より正確な文法を使い、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, it does. As a high school student, I have to study every day, which requires a lot of patience. However, I always try to stay calm and do my best to manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。より明確で具体的な理由を述べ、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because studying consistently from elementary to high school has taught me perseverance. Therefore, I have developed the skills to keep trying even when things are difficult.

× I feel excited when I have to do something for a long time because I can plan about the future careers carefully to achieve my goals.

✓ I feel excited when I have to do something for a long time because I can plan my future career carefully to achieve my goals.

The phrase 'plan about the future careers' is incorrect. The verb 'plan' is typically followed directly by the object without 'about'. Also, 'careers' should be singular 'career' to match the context. The correct phrase is 'plan my future career carefully'.

× Also, I can try task support.

✓ Also, I can try to get support for tasks.

The phrase 'try task support' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The verb 'try' should be followed by 'to' plus a verb, and 'task support' needs clarification. The corrected sentence uses 'try to get support for tasks' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes it does. I'm a high school student so I'm have to stay.

✓ Yes, it does. I'm a high school student so I have to stay.

The phrase 'I'm have to stay' is incorrect. The auxiliary verb 'am' ('I'm') should not be used before 'have to'. The correct form is 'I have to'. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× I have to study every day.

✓ I have to study every day.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× That requires a lot of patience.

✓ That requires a lot of patience.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× However, I always try to stay calm and try my best.

✓ However, I always try to stay calm and do my best.

The phrase 'try my best' is less common and slightly awkward. The more natural expression is 'do my best' to indicate making the best effort.

× Yes, I consider myself more patient now than when I was a kid because through a long term study from elementary school to high school, I think I can get skills to keep trying.

✓ Yes, I consider myself more patient now than when I was a kid because through long-term study from elementary school to high school, I think I have gained skills to keep trying.

The phrase 'through a long term study' should be 'through long-term study' with a hyphen. Also, 'I can get skills' is incorrect; the past tense 'I have gained skills' fits better to indicate acquisition over time.

× Try forecast.

✓ I try to plan ahead.

The phrase 'Try forecast' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence 'I try to plan ahead' conveys the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.