Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I believe it's important to treat others with respect and follow social rules.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tập trung vào một ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

Ví dụ: I usually feel impatient when someone tries to share my private messages because I value my privacy a lot.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I feel exhausted and bored when I have to do something for a long time because it makes me uncomfortable and tired.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy chia câu thành các phần nhỏ hơn và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I am currently a high school student, so I don't have a job. However, I believe school requires patience because it's important when interacting with others.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp lại từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now as a teenager because I understand the consequences of my actions better than when I was a child.

× there are a lot of things in this society that I cannot act in innocence way

✓ there are a lot of things in this society that I cannot act in an innocent way

The phrase 'innocence way' is incorrect because 'innocence' is a noun, but an adjective is needed to describe 'way'. The correct adjective form is 'innocent'. Therefore, it should be 'an innocent way'.

× there are many strict rules about how to treat people in the right way

✓ there are many strict rules about how to treat people in the right way

This sentence is grammatically correct with respect to singular and plural usage; no correction needed here.

× there is a particular uh, things that make me feel impatient

✓ there are particular things that make me feel impatient

The phrase 'there is a particular uh, things' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'things'. The correct verb for plural 'things' is 'are'. Also, 'a particular' should be removed or changed to 'particular' to match plural 'things'.

× there are some, uh, there are things that makes me feel patient

✓ there are some, uh, there are things that make me feel patient

The verb 'makes' is singular but the subject 'things' is plural. The verb should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject.

× it's a really important to me

✓ it's really important to me

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'important'. When using 'important' as an adjective after 'it's', the article 'a' should be omitted.

× it's hardly to say that uh, there is a particular uh, things that make me feel impatient

✓ it's hard to say that there are particular things that make me feel impatient

The phrase 'hardly to say' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'hard to say'. Also, 'there is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'things'.

× doing something is a long in a long time will make me as in umm, feeling that's not unco comfortable

✓ doing something for a long time will make me feel uncomfortable

The phrase 'is a long in a long time' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'for a long time'. Also, 'feeling that's not unco comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'feel uncomfortable'.

× feeling that's not unco comfortable

✓ feeling that's not comfortable

The word 'unco comfortable' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo. The correct adjective is 'uncomfortable' or simply 'not comfortable'.

× I'm not working in any companies or corporations

✓ I'm not working in any company or corporation

The phrase 'any companies or corporations' is plural, but the context suggests a singular workplace. However, if the student means multiple, the original is acceptable. This depends on intended meaning; no correction if plural is intended.

× I'm a student that is studying in high school

✓ I'm a student who is studying at high school

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate for people; 'who' is preferred. Also, the correct preposition for attending school is 'at' rather than 'in'.

× school that must require patient too

✓ school that must require patience too

The noun 'patient' is incorrect here; the correct noun form is 'patience'.

× I have more patience than I than I was a child

✓ I have more patience than I did when I was a child

The phrase 'than I was a child' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct comparative structure is 'than I did when I was a child'.

× when I was a child I act in the an innocent way

✓ when I was a child I acted in an innocent way

The verb 'act' should be in past tense 'acted' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Also, 'the an' is incorrect; it should be 'an'.