Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Improve sentence structure and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, clarify how staying calm helps avoid mistakes and impulsive decisions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because even when I have many things to say, I prefer to stay calm during arguments. This helps me think clearly and avoid making impulsive decisions.

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant but contains filler words and some awkward phrasing. Use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain why illogical arguments cause impatience and how you manage it.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when people make illogical arguments during heated moments because it frustrates me. However, I try to stay calm and composed to avoid acting impulsively.

Gợi ý: The answer is understandable but contains errors and unclear phrases like 'the wine myself'. Avoid redundancy and use clearer expressions. Add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I feel bored and tired when I have to do the same task for a long time because it becomes monotonous. Therefore, I usually try to find ways to make it more interesting.

Gợi ý: The answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct pronouns and sentence structures. Use linking words to explain why patience is needed in your job.

Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because it is demanding and requires effort and time. Moreover, I have to communicate with people from different backgrounds, so patience is essential.

Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like 'been based since with the AIDS'. Clarify your meaning and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain how your patience has improved over time.

Ví dụ: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have realized the importance of not acting impulsively. This helps me communicate better and avoid misunderstandings.

× I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say or but I prefer to stay calm and compose during argument or heated movement.

✓ I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say, but I prefer to stay calm and composed during arguments or heated moments.

The original sentence incorrectly uses both 'or' and 'but' together, which is redundant and grammatically incorrect. Use only 'but' to connect contrasting ideas. Also, 'compose' should be 'composed' as an adjective, and 'argument' and 'heated movement' should be pluralized to 'arguments' and 'heated moments' to match the context.

× I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say or but I prefer to stay calm and compose during argument or heated movement.

✓ I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say, but I prefer to stay calm and composed during arguments or heated moments.

The phrase 'during argument or heated movement' lacks the definite article 'an' before 'argument' and 'heated movement' is incorrect; it should be 'heated moments' to express the intended meaning. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say or but I prefer to stay calm and compose during argument or heated movement.

✓ I consider myself a patient person even though I often have many things to say, but I prefer to stay calm and composed during arguments or heated moments.

The nouns 'argument' and 'heated movement' should be plural ('arguments' and 'heated moments') because the context refers to general situations, not a single instance.

× I often have many things to say or but I prefer to stay calm and compose during argument or heated movement.

✓ I often have many things to say, but I prefer to stay calm and composed during arguments or heated moments.

The phrase 'during argument or heated movement' requires articles before singular countable nouns. Also, 'heated movement' is not idiomatic; 'heated moments' is more appropriate.

× the heated movement or the argument which has uh, been thrown out to me or any other person without any logic.

✓ heated moments or arguments which have been thrown at me or any other person without any logic.

'Heated movement' is incorrect; 'heated moments' is the correct plural form. Also, 'argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match 'heated moments'. The verb 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject.

× the heated movement or the argument which has uh, been thrown out to me or any other person without any logic.

✓ heated moments or arguments which have been thrown at me or any other person without any logic.

The subject 'heated moments or arguments' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, the preposition 'thrown out to' is incorrect; 'thrown at' is the correct expression.

× been thrown out to me or any other person without any logic.

✓ been thrown at me or any other person without any logic.

The correct preposition with 'thrown' in this context is 'at' to indicate directed action towards someone, not 'out to'.

× I often have many things to say or but I prefer to stay calm and compose during argument or heated movement.

✓ I often have many things to say, but I prefer to stay calm and composed during arguments or heated moments.

'Compose' is a verb, but here an adjective 'composed' is needed to describe the state of being calm.

× working the same thing for a long time will be tedious and monotonous.

✓ working on the same thing for a long time will be tedious and monotonous.

The phrase 'working the same thing' is missing the preposition 'on' to indicate the activity being performed.

× working the same thing for a long time will be tedious and monotonous.

✓ working on the same thing for a long time will be tedious and monotonous.

The verb 'work' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to the task or activity being done.

× I will often feel bored by such activities and always want to escape to get some excitement and the wine myself.

✓ I will often feel bored by such activities and always want to escape to get some excitement and unwind myself.

The word 'wine' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'unwind', meaning to relax. Also, 'myself' is correctly used for emphasis.

× Yes, myself require a lot of patience as I have to as it is very demanding and I have to put a lot of effort and time while doing my job.

✓ Yes, I require a lot of patience as it is very demanding and I have to put a lot of effort and time while doing my job.

'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and cannot be used as the subject. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'.

× Yes, myself require a lot of patience as I have to as it is very demanding and I have to put a lot of effort and time while doing my job.

✓ Yes, I require a lot of patience as it is very demanding and I have to put a lot of effort and time while doing my job.

The sentence has an unnecessary 'as I have to' which disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I also have to deal with people from the different perspectives and backgrounds so I need to be patient for the communication.

✓ I also have to deal with people from different perspectives and backgrounds, so I need to be patient in communication.

The phrase 'patient for the communication' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being patient during communication.

× I think that I have been based since with the AIDS.

✓ I think that I have become more patient since childhood.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('based', 'AIDS'). The intended meaning seems to be about becoming more patient since childhood.

× It is because I realized the importance of being patients and do not act impulsively.

✓ It is because I realized the importance of being patient and not acting impulsively.

'Patients' is a noun; the adjective 'patient' is needed here. Also, parallel structure requires 'not acting' instead of 'do not act'.

× I do not want to miscommunicate either or act impulsively.

✓ I do not want to miscommunicate or act impulsively.

The phrase 'either or' is incorrect; use 'or' alone to connect the two negative actions.