Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 중복되고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 자신의 인내심에 대해 직접적으로 답변하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I am somewhat patient, but I tend to lose patience when things don't go as planned. For example, I often give up on tasks if I fail repeatedly, which makes me feel frustrated.

Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 인내심을 잃게 만드는 구체적인 상황을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I feel impatient when things do not go according to my plans, especially if unexpected problems occur that delay my progress.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중간에 끊기고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 감정을 명확히 표현하고, 계획을 세우는 방법 등 구체적인 내용을 추가해 답변을 완성하세요.

Ví dụ: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel like quitting. However, I always make a plan to stay focused and try my best to complete the task.

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 직업과 인내심의 관계를 명확히 설명하고, 구체적인 예시를 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, as a student, I need to be very patient because preparing for exams requires long hours of study and consistent effort.

Gợi ý: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문장 구조가 단순하고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 과거와 현재를 비교하는 문장을 다양하게 사용하고, 구체적인 경험을 추가하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because the Korean education system taught me to be persistent. For example, taking many exams and cooperating with classmates helped me develop patience.

× I usually give up some things when the things don't go as I planned.

✓ I usually give up some things when things don't go as I planned.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect here because 'things' is a general plural noun and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× And I easily frustrated every time I made a fail, make a fail.

✓ And I get easily frustrated every time I fail.

The verb 'frustrated' needs an auxiliary verb to form the passive or be used as an adjective. Also, 'made a fail' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fail'. The sentence is corrected to use 'get easily frustrated' and 'fail' properly.

× I because I'm a very, very friend, prime person.

✓ Because I'm a very, very friendly person.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Friend, prime person' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'friendly person'. Also, 'I because' is incorrect; 'Because' should start the sentence.

× I'm very impatient when the things don't go as I planned.

✓ I'm very impatient when things don't go as I planned.

Similar to the previous issue, 'the things' is incorrect; 'things' without 'the' is correct here.

× And I have to do something for a long time.

✓ If I have to do something for a long time,

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Starting with 'And' is informal and the sentence lacks a main clause. Rephrasing to a conditional clause improves clarity.

× I usually feel like, oh, I want to quit these things, but I, I do my best to achieve my task to the end.

✓ I usually feel like, 'Oh, I want to quit these things,' but I do my best to complete my tasks to the end.

Adding quotation marks around the thought improves clarity. 'Achieve my task' is awkward; 'complete my tasks' is more natural. Also, removing the repeated 'I' improves fluency.

× So I always make a plan and.

✓ So I always make a plan.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Yeah, my job, the student required a patient a lot.

✓ Yeah, my job as a student requires a lot of patience.

'The student' is incorrect; it should be 'as a student'. 'Required' should be 'requires' to agree with 'job'. 'A patient' is incorrect; the noun 'patience' is uncountable.

× For example, I have to take a exam or the formative evaluation and to prepare them I have to study a lot in a long time.

✓ For example, I have to take an exam or formative evaluations, and to prepare for them, I have to study a lot for a long time.

'A exam' should be 'an exam' because 'exam' starts with a vowel sound. 'The formative evaluation' should be plural or indefinite. 'Prepare them' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare for them'. 'In a long time' should be 'for a long time'.

× So I need to get a patient.

✓ So I need to be patient.

'Get a patient' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be patient'.

× Yeah, but I'm more patient than childhood because I took Korean educational systems.

✓ Yeah, but I'm more patient than in childhood because I went through the Korean educational system.

'Than childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'than in childhood'. 'Took Korean educational systems' is incorrect; 'went through the Korean educational system' is more natural and correct.

× Under the Korean system, we can get a lot of patience because we have to take exams and we have to get along with friends well.

✓ Under the Korean system, we can develop a lot of patience because we have to take exams and get along well with friends.

'Get a lot of patience' is awkward; 'develop a lot of patience' is better. 'Get along with friends well' is better as 'get along well with friends'.

× So I get a lot of patience.

✓ So I have developed a lot of patience.

'Get a lot of patience' is awkward; 'have developed a lot of patience' is more natural and grammatically correct.