Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਗਲਤ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਵਰਤੀ ਗਈ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਰੱਖੋ, ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕਿ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਫਿਰ ਵਧੇਰੇ ਜਾਣਕਾਰੀ ਦਿਓ।

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when I face challenges at work, I remain calm and think carefully before acting.

Gợi ý: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ, ਜਿਸ ਨਾਲ ਅਰਥ ਸਮਝਣਾ ਮੁਸ਼ਕਲ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।

Ví dụ: I usually feel patient, but I get impatient when I have to wait during enjoyable moments with friends, as it makes me feel bored.

Gợi ý: ਜਵਾਬ ਬਹੁਤ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗੈਰ-ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਹੈ। ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੇਰੇ ਵਿਸਥਾਰ ਨਾਲ ਸਮਝਾਓ ਕਿ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਲੰਮੇ ਸਮੇਂ ਲਈ ਕੰਮ ਕਰਦੇ ਸਮੇਂ ਕਿਵੇਂ ਮਹਿਸੂਸ ਕਰਦੇ ਹੋ।

Ví dụ: When I have to work for a long time, I sometimes feel bored, but I try to stay focused by reminding myself of the goal.

Gợi ý: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ।

Ví dụ: Yes, patience is essential in any job. If I lose my calm, I might make mistakes, so I always try to stay patient to do my work correctly.

Gợi ý: ਜਵਾਬ ਗੈਰ-ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਹੈ। ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਆਪਣੇ ਤਜਰਬੇ ਬਾਰੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਦੱਸੋ।

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to handle difficult situations calmly over time.

× I think I'm a business person.

✓ I think I'm a patient person.

The student likely meant to say 'patient person' instead of 'business person' as per the question context. Using the wrong pronoun or noun changes the meaning and causes confusion.

× I'm very calm in the life if I have to do any work, so I am to show the calmness on that time.

✓ I'm very calm in life when I have to do any work, so I show calmness at that time.

Incorrect prepositions 'in the life' and 'on that time' should be 'in life' and 'at that time' respectively. Prepositions must match the context to convey correct meaning.

× I'm the very easiest person, but one thing they are really upset to me and I feel impatient on that time, that time when I have good time with any other person.

✓ I'm a very easygoing person, but one thing really upsets me and I feel impatient at that time, especially when I am having a good time with someone else.

Incorrect plural 'they are' used instead of singular 'one thing is'. Also, 'easiest' is a superlative and not appropriate here; 'easygoing' fits better. Prepositions and pronouns corrected for clarity.

× So that time I feel bored and patience and life.

✓ At that time, I feel bored and lose patience in life.

Preposition 'so that time' should be 'at that time'. Also, 'patience' is a noun and cannot be used as a verb; 'lose patience' is correct.

× As an HTML reactor, but pass on and I find that some new in the every point of life when I have to something, then you work for the long time, so that time I have to feel some bored because that time I were too warm.

✓ As an HTML developer, I find that there is always something new at every point in life. When I have to work for a long time, I sometimes feel bored because it gets too warm.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected for clarity, proper subject-verb agreement, and appropriate vocabulary. 'HTML reactor' corrected to 'HTML developer' assuming intended meaning.

× Absolutely patient is a must require for any type of job because if sometime when I have to see the curse in the work when I have to lose the calmness on that time, so I will to do the many mistakes but I have to face the right time to the right.

✓ Absolutely, patience is a must for any type of job because sometimes when I face challenges at work and lose calmness, I tend to make many mistakes, but I have to handle the situation correctly.

Incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing corrected for clarity. 'Must require' changed to 'is a must', 'see the curse' to 'face challenges', and sentence restructured for coherence.

× Uh, yes, I'm the more patience in my junk age rather than my childhood time because that time I will not to face the that strike us in front of me.

✓ Uh, yes, I am more patient in my young age than in my childhood because back then I did not have to face the challenges that I face now.

Incorrect pronouns and word choice corrected. 'More patience' changed to 'more patient', 'junk age' to 'young age', and sentence rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.