Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些语法错误和用词不当（如“down something”应为“do something”，“catch up a trim”不清楚）。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免冗长。可以简洁地说明自己不耐心，并举具体例子。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not a very patient person. I usually want to finish my assignments quickly because it gives me a sense of accomplishment, especially when I have to meet tight deadlines.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（如“have to finished”应为“have to finish”，“in a type deadline”表达不准确）。建议直接回答问题，使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: I feel impatient mainly when I have to finish assignments quickly. For instance, submitting articles before strict deadlines often makes me anxious and stressed.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用更多连词如“so”或“therefore”使表达更自然，同时细化例子。

Ví dụ: I feel energetic when I work on tasks for a long time because they help me improve my skills. Therefore, I create a timetable to manage my study time effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误（如“which I need to spend a lot of time on it”重复）。建议简洁表达，使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. My job requires patience because I need to spend a lot of time ensuring the information in articles is accurate, which can be time-consuming.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，表达较好。建议使用更多连接词如“because”或“so”使句子更连贯，并稍微丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have trained myself through daily tasks. For example, completing time-consuming assignments has taught me that patience helps avoid mistakes and improves efficiency.

× I always want to finish the assignment in a short time, which can give me a great sense of accomplishment, especially when I have to down something in a rush hour, for example, when I have to catch up a trim or meet the deadline.

✓ I always want to finish the assignment in a short time, which can give me a great sense of accomplishment, especially when I have to do something in a rush hour, for example, when I have to catch up a trim or meet the deadline.

The phrase 'have to down something' is incorrect because 'down' is not the correct verb form here. The correct verb is 'do' to express performing an action. 'Down' is not used as a verb in this context. Use 'do' to indicate carrying out a task.

× There are several ways can make me feel impatient, especially when I have to finished my assignment in a short time.

✓ There are several ways that can make me feel impatient, especially when I have to finish my assignment in a short time.

The phrase 'have to finished' is incorrect because 'have to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. The correct form is 'have to finish'. Also, 'ways can make' is missing 'that' to connect the clause properly.

× For example, I have to submit my article in a type deadline which will make me feel impatient and stressful.

✓ For example, I have to submit my article by a tight deadline which makes me feel impatient and stressed.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate a deadline is 'by'. Also, 'type deadline' should be 'tight deadline' to express urgency. 'Stressful' describes a situation, while 'stressed' describes a feeling, so 'stressed' is more appropriate.

× Well, I really feel energetic when I have to do something for a long time, because these tasks can help me to improve my skills and encourage me to manage my time more efficiently.

✓ Well, I really feel energetic when I have to do something for a long time because these tasks can help me improve my skills and encourage me to manage my time more efficiently.

The conjunction 'because' should not be preceded by a comma in this sentence. Also, 'help me to improve' can be simplified to 'help me improve' for better fluency.

× Absolutely, since there are many details which I need to spend a lot of time on it.

✓ Absolutely, since there are many details on which I need to spend a lot of time.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time on it' is incorrect because 'which' already refers to 'details', so 'it' is redundant. Also, the preposition 'on' should come before 'which' in formal English: 'details on which I need to spend time'.

× For example, I have to ensure the information in the article are accurate.

✓ For example, I have to ensure the information in the article is accurate.

The noun 'information' is uncountable and singular, so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of 'are'.