PatiencePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you a patient person?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think I am a very patient person. For instance, when my friend ask me some questions or do something together, I always be very patient and calm. I believe it's a good way to create a positive atmosphere and maintain a good relationship with others.

Giám khảo

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Thí sinh

Actually, there are several things that make me feel impatient, but the main trigger is waiting for a long time. Especially I have a tight schedule. For example, when I stand in line at the mark or supermarket, I always be frustrating because it's a.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Thí sinh

Actually, I have mixed feelings about doing something for a long time. For example, if I have do it for one or two months, I will be patient and full of energy because I know the task is temporary. However, if I should do it for one or two years, I would be anxious about it because I can't say the end of it.

Giám khảo

Does your job require you to be patient?

Thí sinh

There's my job requires me to be very patient because I should do a a wide research online and make some detailed handcuffs. So being patient make me focus on the work for a long time and avoid making mistakes.

Giám khảo

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think I'm more patient now than when I was a child because during the childhood I used to be more anxious about my grades and friendship because I want everything to be perfect. But now I know I can't control everything so just let it happen naturally.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you a patient person?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和用词需更准确,避免语法错误,如"ask"应为"asks","always be"应为"am always"。此外,回答可以更简洁自然,避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when my friends ask me questions or we do activities together, I remain calm and attentive. This helps create a positive atmosphere and strengthens our relationships.

What is it that makes you feel impatient?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,如"I always be frustrating"应为"I always feel frustrated"。句子未完成,需完整表达观点。建议补充完整句子并使用连贯的表达。

Ví dụ: Several things make me feel impatient, but mainly waiting for a long time, especially when I have a tight schedule. For instance, standing in line at the supermarket often makes me feel frustrated because it wastes my time.

How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"if I have do it"应为"if I have to do it","I can't say the end of it"表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词,使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: I have mixed feelings about long-term tasks. If I have to do something for one or two months, I stay patient and energetic because I know it's temporary. However, if the task lasts one or two years, I might feel anxious since the end is uncertain.

Does your job require you to be patient?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有明显语法错误和词汇使用错误,如"There's my job"应为"My job", "a a wide research"应为"extensive research", "handcuffs"用词错误,应为"handouts"或"reports"。建议注意词汇准确性和语法结构。

Ví dụ: My job requires me to be very patient because I need to conduct extensive online research and prepare detailed reports. Being patient helps me focus for long periods and avoid mistakes.

Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但语法和表达可更自然,如"during the childhood"应为"when I was a child","I want"应为"I wanted"。建议注意时态一致和表达流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I used to be anxious about my grades and friendships because I wanted everything to be perfect. Now, I understand that I can't control everything and just let things happen naturally.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× when my friend ask me some questions or do something together, I always be very patient and calm.

when my friend asks me some questions or does something together, I am always very patient and calm.

主语是单数形式的my friend,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式asks和does;另外,be动词在此句中应使用am而非be。

Verb in the present participle form

× I always be very patient and calm.

I am always very patient and calm.

be动词在一般现在时第一人称单数应为am,不能用be。

Verb in the present participle form

× I always be frustrating because it's a.

I always feel frustrated because it's annoying.

be动词不能直接用be frustrating表达感受,应使用feel frustrated;原句不完整,补充合理内容。

Verb in the past participle form

× if I have do it for one or two months, I will be patient and full of energy because I know the task is temporary.

if I have to do it for one or two months, I will be patient and full of energy because I know the task is temporary.

动词短语应为have to do,表示必须做某事,原句缺少to。

Modal verb usage

× if I should do it for one or two years, I would be anxious about it because I can't say the end of it.

if I have to do it for one or two years, I would be anxious about it because I can't say when it will end.

条件句中应使用have to表示必须,should用法不当;另外,表达“我不能说出它的结束时间”应改为when it will end。

There be issue

× There's my job requires me to be very patient because I should do a a wide research online and make some detailed handcuffs.

My job requires me to be very patient because I have to do wide research online and make some detailed handcuffs.

There is结构用法错误,句子主语应直接为My job;a wide research中research不可数,去掉a;handcuffs用词不当,可能是handouts或handcrafts,需根据语境调整。

Modal verb usage

× I should do a a wide research online and make some detailed handcuffs.

I have to do wide research online and make some detailed handouts.

should用法不当,表示义务时应使用have to;research不可数,去掉a;handcuffs应为handouts(讲义)或handcrafts(手工艺品),根据语境选择。

Verb in the present participle form

× So being patient make me focus on the work for a long time and avoid making mistakes.

So being patient makes me focus on the work for a long time and avoid making mistakes.

主语being patient为单数,谓语动词应使用makes。

Singular and plural issue

× There's my job requires me to be very patient because I should do a a wide research online and make some detailed handcuffs.

My job requires me to be very patient because I have to do wide research online and make some detailed handouts.

research是不可数名词,前面不应加冠词a;handcuffs复数形式用词不当,应根据语境改为handouts或其他合适词。

Verb in the past participle form

× I want everything to be perfect.

I want everything to be perfect.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

Verb in the present participle form

× But now I know I can't control everything so just let it happen naturally.

But now I know I can't control everything, so I just let it happen naturally.

句子缺少主语I,导致句子结构不完整,应补充。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FullFilled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
PerfectIdeal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
WideBroad; Fully open; Comprehensive; Agape; Undecided
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